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Playing On My Mind

You see I hate housework assigned playing always on my mind my work must come first My thoughts are about to burst I should not wear a dress of any kind Date Written: 7/16/2022 2 Place LimerickContest Judged: 7/19/2022 Sponsored by: Lisa YY

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 12:07:00 PM

Well penned... Thanks for sharing.. Stay blessed

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2022 2:20:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you enjoyed my fun/cute write. I am for playing and leaving all the housework behind. Have a blessed day writing away................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/24/2022 2:13:00 PM

Play is better than housework of any kind Paula. Congratulations on your win with this delight of a write…. Blessings, Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2022 2:19:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. I am with you. Let us go play and leave the housework behind. Have a blessed day writing away................

Eve Roper

Date: 7/23/2022 1:20:00 PM

Cute, Paula, I've always been a hyper and so meticulous person . Congratulations on your win. Many Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/24/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/20/2022 7:07:00 PM

Way to skirt the issue, Paula. Lol. Nicely done! ~ gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you enjoyed my fun/cute write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 7/20/2022 6:46:00 PM

Big Congrats on your win Paula. Well done! Lol.. I'm an not a fan of housework either. Cheers my friend:-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. I hope heaven has maids. "Please" Have a blessed day writing away................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 6:41:00 AM

Very interesting. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2022 8:54:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like my "Playing On My Mind" write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Joseph May

Date: 7/20/2022 3:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win Paula, Nicely done

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2022 8:53:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like my cute/fun write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Valsa George

Date: 7/19/2022 10:24:00 PM

Well done.... ! Congratulations, Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2022 8:53:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like my fun write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2022 1:49:00 PM

Cute one, paula. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:17:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like my cute write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/19/2022 1:05:00 PM

Good one, Paula. CONGRATS! Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:17:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Terry Flood

Date: 7/19/2022 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations, Paula. Well done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:16:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. Glad you like my fun limerick write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/19/2022 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula! Linda

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:15:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun win. It was a fun limerick to write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/19/2022 4:37:00 AM

Nice limerick, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:12:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. So glad you like my fun limerick write. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day writing away................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/19/2022 2:38:00 AM

Much rather write poetry than be tormented by housework....but it has to be done....Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:11:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like my fun write. You just said how I feel. Today, I did clothes and on soup. Have a blessed day writing away................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/18/2022 9:20:00 AM

Very cool limerick In my next life, hope to have a maid And a cook, Panagiota xxx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:10:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this fun write. Yes, in the next life I want a maid/cook. Have a blessed day writing away................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/17/2022 8:53:00 PM

You and I must have both attended the 'Phyllis Diller School of Housekeeping.' lol. Her famous joke: "They say housework never hurt anyone. Well, I don't want to find out whether it's true or not." Cheers, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:08:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this School of Housekeeping write. In school I cleaned houses for 5 years for money. Thought it was going to kill me. Have a blessed day writing away................

Bill Baker

Date: 7/17/2022 3:52:00 PM

Cute Limerick, Paula. you're going to get cold doing your chores like that. :-) Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:05:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this fun write. Never thought about getting cold. Oh No!!! Have a blessed day writing away................

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/16/2022 9:11:00 PM

Oh yes, love this Paula, clever limerick.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 9:13:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you love this fun limerick write. Playing is always better than work. Work must get done. Have a blessed day writing away................

Ann Foster

Date: 7/16/2022 6:32:00 PM

I am always in favor of playing over work. Well written. Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 9:11:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this fun write. Yes, playing over work is always better. Have a blessed day writing away................