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The knock upon my door was sharp I found to my surprise a big raccoon was standing there with fury in his eyes. He handed his burden to me and left without a word. Had we had a common language this is what I might have heard. Please keep your roaming cat at home. He’s leading my kids astray. I’m teaching them to search for food. He’s taking them off to play. A raccoon doesn’t have a choice he must scrounge for all he gets. He will never have the pampered life that is offered to your house pets. So kitty stays inside glass door watching as raccoon family eats the piles of food I leave for them. He’s glad to share his treats. For Francine's "Tell Me About It Story" contest Won no. 2

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Date: 4/19/2011 8:38:00 AM
hey joyce, This is cute.. I have a raccoon that hangs around my house too, nature is pretty cool in the woods.. you get to see a lot even if it can be a burden..Go out and make it a great tuesday... Cory
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:42:00 AM
Wonderful story, Joyce. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/6/2011 7:10:00 PM
Ha! Good one..congrats on your big win. BG
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Date: 4/6/2011 6:48:00 PM
Great to see you at the top Joyce. Nice take on the picture. Congratulations on your worthy second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/6/2011 4:43:00 PM
Great idea rags and riches story!!! congratulations on your 2nd place win!!!
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Date: 4/6/2011 1:55:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your big win in Francine's contest with this awesome creation my friend.. another amazing write and win.. enjoy your 2nd place ..luv..
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Date: 4/6/2011 12:33:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Joyce. Great job. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 4/6/2011 12:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win : ) Jack
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Francine Roberts contest "Tell me about it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:15:00 AM
Delighted to see your big win, Joyce!! Congratulations. Love, carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:05:00 AM
this is adorable Joyce, congrats on your 2nd place win in the contest
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Date: 3/27/2011 12:36:00 PM
You do have a great imagination, Joyce! I like the thought of the raccoon returning the kitty to it's "pampered life" so that there'll be more food for his family. The raccoons do rummage through garbage cans here too, Joyce, and will eat just about any table scraps they find. Even those left by a finicky, pampered house pet. Best wishes in Francine's contest! Really enjoyed reading your entry. What a great photo she posted for inspiration. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/26/2011 6:06:00 PM
Very cute Joyce and a proud entry and lovely story of a concerned Mom watching out for her youngsters.. and the kitty leading them astray to play.. good luck my friend.. an awesome view of the photo my friend..
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Date: 3/26/2011 7:36:00 AM
How cute this is!! I haven't yet tackled this one, but those I've read are wonderful !
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