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Writing Challenge - P words - Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 07/29/2023. Poem of the day on 07/30/2023

"As-salamu-alaikum," That means "Peace be upon you" in Arabic. Like most beauty pageants, I long for world peace, too. And I wish you Nothing but peace. I sure hope you know The kind I mean! What? Do I want a piece of you? Come on now, don't be silly! Drop those dukes, my guy. I'm a peaceful man. A lover, not a fighter. Don't go grab a piece either! No sir, I want no shootouts! How about we live and let live? I'm no bird-flipper; that's not my style! I'd rather flash Peace signs to you. I prefer a firm handshake. Over throwing and parrying hooks Do not wage war with me. I want no beef with you. I've consumed more than enough! Instead, can we at least try Being vegetarians? If you extend your hand Right or left, I'd shake it And wish you a nice life.

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Date: 8/4/2023 12:20:00 PM
If those that are destructive can heed your words Edward this world would be a better place. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD...
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/4/2023 6:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Michael:-)
Date: 8/1/2023 10:52:00 AM
Powerful message woven into your delightful word play, Edward! Sending you bouquets and congratulations for your POTD! Peace be with you my friend!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/2/2023 10:14:00 AM
Thank you very much as always, Sam:-) It's always a delight to hear from you, my friend.
Date: 7/31/2023 11:13:00 PM
Love the message in your verse Edward, congratulations on a well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2023 2:02:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 8:38:00 PM
This a very powerful writing on the need for a peaceful existence. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2023 2:01:00 AM
Thanks again, Christuraj:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 7:51:00 PM
Edward, there are so many ways you can say: "Let's all get along." However, you have expressed this phrase in such an interesting/unique way. The comparison at the end is brilliant. A kind word is always welcomed, and never goes out of style. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Brandy:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 7:51:00 PM
I like the back and forth, nice write and congrats to you!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Hat:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Edward! You accomplished this with humor. God bless!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 12:43:00 PM
- Congratulations ... as deserved :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:35:00 PM
Thanks again, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your double win. Have a great day with your double win............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 9:11:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on POTD
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the POTD! 'I am a lover not a fighter" like many and yet meanspirited let their hurtful words get the best of them. Hoping for peaceful tidings Edward. Ve en paz. Salom!:)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ananya:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 7:24:00 AM
Edward Ibeh always writes great poems. This is one of them. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 7:07:00 AM
Very creative way to show your thoughts on peace and life, Ibeh. Congratulations on your POTD! Peace be upon you. Bill
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Bill:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 6:53:00 AM
Edward, I really like the way you conveyed this message is such a uniquely poetic way!! No wonder is it POTD!! A beautiful poem this is!!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mike:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 6:50:00 AM
Edward, Congratulations on Your POTD. Live and let live. We need a lot more of that. Have A Great Day.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, RJ:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 6:50:00 AM
Edward, this is fantastic! I love the light-hearted tone and the word play to convey an important message! Congrats on your POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Edward….Debx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Deb:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 6:28:00 AM
"Live and let live..." Great idea that more people should observe and respect. Congratulations on having written today's, POTD, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lin:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 5:49:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Edward. I like the message of your poem, it is simply great!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2023 8:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Arastu:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 5:47:00 AM
Peace rules. Cute and clever write
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2023 2:08:00 AM
Thank you, Tom:-)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/31/2023 7:32:00 PM
There's peace in poetry.
Date: 7/31/2023 5:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. .... a winner in the contest too ... without a doubt :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2023 2:06:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 4:26:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Edward. Your message resonates. Enjoy your special day today.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2023 2:05:00 AM
Thanks again, Vijay:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 7/31/2023 3:52:00 AM
Ed, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2023 2:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 2:06:00 AM
The world wide language of peace and love is a conversation that begins with us. Congratulations Edward on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2023 2:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Belle:-)
Date: 7/31/2023 1:48:00 AM
Wise counsel, Edward - you speak your mind boldly and honestly. Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2023 2:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
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