Paper Plane

Since you left, I've been unable to dream, I toss about in tangled sheets all night. And fold paper planes, odd as that may seem, preparing the night's fledgling fears for flight. I believed we'd be together till death, till you cast me aside: alone and scared. And left little incentive to draw breath, what hurt the most was that I thought you cared. Each night, I scribble down my hurt and pain, inscribing how love devastated me. And fold that page into a paper plane; wanting the winds of fate to set me free. And await a breeze to launch my letter: hoping once it takes flight, I'll sleep better.
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Miller Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 1:36 AM
A beautiful sonnet Emile such feelings within the lines; congratulations, truly well-deserved!
Pinet Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Lawless Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Beautifully done Emile Would that such fears could be so easily dispatched.
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 9:18 PM
Oh Emile, this poem is incredibly beautiful and moving. It resonates with my heart perfectly. This is one of the best sonnets I have read. Straight into my Faves! It is certainly deserving of POTD! I really loved every line! Congratulations on having it honored. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Thanks, Connie, your words honor me, I'm so fortunate to have you as a friend, Emile.
Emate Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 9:51 PM
Oh! This is so beautiful. Congratulations on it being the POTD.
Pinet Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your comments, have a good day my friend, Emile.
Nicole Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 8:39 PM
When we place our thoughts to the page, we are setting them free. The *paper plane* analogy makes perfect sense, because there are times when we want the wind to take them far away. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Emile, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Thanks, Brandy, I appreciate your in-depth comments, have a good day my friend, Emile.
Anaya Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 8:24 PM
Congratulations on POTD Emile Pinet! Creative and bravely expressing hurt. ~ Anaya
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, Anaya, I appreciate your comments, have a good day my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 4:46 PM
Congratulations, Emile, on POTD!
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 7:58 PM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate it my friend, God Bless, Emile.
Watt Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 4:41 PM
Emile, such a touching sonnet. I will have to try this strategy of writing down the fears and pains that prevent sleep and send them away on a paper airplane before bedtime. Loved reading your creativity, congratulations for POTD today. Best wishes ~ John
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 7:57 PM
Thanks, John, your comments have brought a smile to my day, my friend, Emile.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Congratulations, Emile, on your POTD honour. Passionate thoughts in brilliant poetic form! BW ~ Mala
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 7:55 PM
Thanks, Mala, I appreciate your comments, have a good day my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 3:04 PM
Emile, your poem is so emotional and beautifully penned, I love it and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, God Bless ~ Constance
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate your comments my friend, God Bless, Emile.
Slaughter Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:39 AM
I love the metaphor, Emile. BOL in the contest.
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 12:31 PM
Thanks, Jim, I appreciate your comments, have a great day my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations, Emile, on your P.O.T.D. A beautiful, poignant, heartfelt poem. Enjoy your day, my friend.
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:16 AM
Thanks, Milit, I can never express enough how I appreciate your comments my friend, have a great day, Emile.
Gentile Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 9:14 AM
Emile, congratulations on your POTD honors for your heartfelt and very moving Sonnet! Enjoy your day!!
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:15 AM
Thanks, Mike, I appreciate your comments, have a good day my friend, Emile.
Baker Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 7:11 AM
Great creative entry for the contest, Emile. The title gave it away, but it was still very engaging and suspenseful. I enjoy the read. Congratulations on your POTD honor, my friend. I put this on my FAV's list. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Thanks, Bill, I appreciate your encouraging comments, my Texas friend, Emile.
May Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:47 AM
Writing through the pain, and "preparing the night's fledgling fears for flight.", Congrats on POTD Emile
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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September 1, 2022 at 6:35 AM
A sad poem though lovely too, congratulations Emile on being honoured with poem of the day… Belle
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Thanks, Belle, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:34 AM
Wow Emile. This is a delicate flight bound for kindly winds. So lovely! Congratulations on your much-deserved POTD! Linda
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:39 AM
Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Mccann Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 4:29 AM
Such a perfect depiction of letting go difficult emotions, then being free! Thank you for this very clever and touching image! Elizabeth
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:39 AM
Thanks, Elizabeth, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Kitchin Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 4:21 AM
Emile, a beautiful emotive poem, congratulations on POTD!
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:38 AM
Thanks, Tania, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Tor Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 1:29 AM
Congratulations Emile for this heartfelt Piece. Excellent theme, enjoyed reading my friend...
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:38 AM
Thanks, Michael, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 1:14 AM
Back again to congratulate you on POTD, Emile
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:37 AM
Thanks, Unseeking. I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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September 1, 2022 at 12:45 AM
What a beautiful poem Emile.! Congratulations on POTD for this outstanding poem. Debx
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Thanks, Deb, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 9:55 PM
Beautiful! Enjoyed every word, woven together to create a masterpiece! A fave
Pinet Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, I am honored by your comments, my friend, Emile.
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