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"The day my grandma died I was called by my uncle to go to the nursing home and told take whatever you want, the rest is going for donation.  I stood in her room with her body still on the bed, weeping.  At ninety-five she had little left of her life.  But, I found her jewelry box and looking through it her pink clip earrings. The ones I recall from childhood when she would tell stories. They are now my most precious treasure. When I look at them I am back with grandma at the kitchen table listening with my huge little girl eyes. She encouraged me to write and is the reason I am the writer, I am today."

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When my grandma died I was told, to take what I want from her; nursing home room whatever things I wanted. I opened her old, tattered jewelry box, and found pink earrings she always wore; not pierced but clips and huge balls, that's all I took- her pink earrings. ____________________ October 24, 2020 Poetry/Verse/One Treasure of Grandma Copyright Protected, ID 10-1297-519-11 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, 49er sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 11/1/20 First Place

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Date: 11/12/2020 3:20:00 AM
Touching piece, Constance. Hurrah on your win! And your comment below is so poetic - "I know she loved them for she wore them all the time until she didn't..." I have a charm bracelet from my granny who died in 1965. I treasure it more than my Pandoras. Her father, a jeweler, made it which adds to its memories.
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Date: 11/12/2020 5:26:00 AM
Reason, thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment, I love that line too, odd how lines just come to us, growing up grandma always wore those earrings so they are a sweet reminder of her as I am sure that charm bracelet is to you, I cannot wear the earrings as they are the old fashion clip on type and big balls of pink pearl like beads, but I keep them on my dresser _Constance
Date: 11/4/2020 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance. This is a lovely poem. Just a pair of earrings... the memories of her are worth so much more. And you probably wouldn't even ever wear clip-ons. I can relate to this poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 11/4/2020 2:14:00 PM
Carol, thank you for the congratulation and the nice comment, I picked those earrings because they represented her, I know she loved them for she wore them all the time until she didn't _Constance
Date: 11/4/2020 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A " Beautiful" write. Many times it is that one or two things that mean the most. While others try and take it all. I just had that happen. The couple of things I really wanted, were taken along with everything else by others. Enjoy your win and day writing away........................
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Date: 11/4/2020 2:17:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful and the comment, my grandma had given me many things when she gave up her apartment to go into a nursing home, one was an antique doll, she told me to keep it a secret and when she died my uncle was looking for it but I said nothing, I just took those earrings I would never wear but love forever _Constance
Date: 11/3/2020 1:09:00 PM
such a touching piece Constance, i know what a great impact she had on your life, you must miss her dearly. many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:21:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the wonderful comment, grandma is with me as I write each poetic word, I do miss her very much and thanks for the congrats _Constance
Date: 11/2/2020 2:06:00 PM
I love the story you tell of this very significant person in your life, and the pink earrings that have become a treasure for the memories they carry with them. Charming and so endearing. Congratulations on your trophy win, Constance ~ John
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Date: 11/3/2020 11:24:00 AM
John, thank you for the lovely comment, the compliment, and the congratulations, isn't it awesome to get a trophy on a poem _Constance
Date: 11/2/2020 11:10:00 AM
Beautiful heartfelt construction Constance! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/3/2020 11:25:00 AM
Linda, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Date: 11/2/2020 8:43:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your first place win! This is so tender yet poignant and very touching. All the best!
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Date: 11/3/2020 11:25:00 AM
Sam, thank you for the congratulations and for the comment _Constance
Date: 11/2/2020 5:54:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Constance. Janice
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Date: 11/2/2020 7:14:00 AM
Janice, thank you very much for the congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/2/2020 3:38:00 AM
Congrats on the so deserved win, dear Constance. This is a beautiful poem and story. You are truly a sweetheart! God bless you
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Date: 11/2/2020 7:15:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the congrats and the compliment and comment, I will never forget that day, ever _Constance
Date: 11/1/2020 11:02:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem. I have a pair of Black heart earrings from my Nanny. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
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Date: 11/2/2020 7:17:00 AM
Joanna, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, nice you have something to treasure of your nanny, so you understand _ Constance
Date: 11/1/2020 10:44:00 PM
Congrats on your top win! Memories of grandma!! lovely story and true!
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Date: 11/2/2020 7:17:00 AM
Krish, thanks for the congrats, appreciate _Constance

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