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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ one teaspoon at a time, the rain turns mountains into valleys

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/12/2024 3:43:00 AM
Dear Sara. Good Morning. I love the positiveness in this and within your words. Truly. Your entry gives hope that there is light. Thank you for sharing inspiration. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. I'm sorry that its been so long. May you and Bill have a wonderful morning and weekend. Love Peace and Blessings always to you both. (smile)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 4:35:00 AM
I'm delighted my poem gave you a sense of hope. Thanks for turning to my page; I'm grateful for your visit today, hugs & blessings, Sara
Date: 3/4/2024 5:11:00 AM
- Excellent and so truthfully written, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/12/2024 4:34:00 AM
thank you, Anne-Lise. Appreciate your visit, hugs Sara
Date: 3/2/2024 10:32:00 AM
Slow but sure gets there in the end. I remember watching a documentary about the source of the Nile, couldn't believe the source, it was just a small trickle of water. Enjoy your weekend Sara. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:23:00 PM
wow, I didn't know that about the Nile...that's amazing! Thanks for sharing. Mother Nature is persistent and consistent. Have a wonderful weekend, Sara
Date: 3/2/2024 7:25:00 AM
and eons pass!!! Great job with this
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:22:00 PM
yes, eons do pass! Thanks for your enthusiasm. enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 3/2/2024 5:42:00 AM
Very wise my friend and profound... deep one liner...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:21:00 PM
thank you, Silent One...grateful for your visit and mindful comments.
Date: 3/2/2024 5:24:00 AM
When change is forced upon us, we will just rebuild the past. In order to be accepted, real change comes slowly. A most brilliant monoku, Sara. Enjoy your weekend, my friend.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:21:00 PM
thanks for your insightful words and compliments about my poem. I agree...real change takes time and patience. Have a wonderful weekend, your poet friend, Sara
Date: 3/2/2024 4:31:00 AM
wow a fav, my father used to say its easy for rain to slide down a mountain but try taking water uphill, my father was an Alpinist in Italy.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:34:00 AM
thanks for sharing your dad's wise words. An Alpinist in Italy. Fascinating! Humbly grateful for the fave. Have a splendid weekend, dearest Rose, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/2/2024 2:41:00 AM
Ain't that the truth. Something also to say for persistence, and one small, good deed at a time. Love this!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:33:00 AM
well said, Joe. One small, good deed at a time makes a difference. enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 7:05:00 PM
Dear Sara, your poetic Monuku is a profound exploration of metaphor, reminiscent of literary genius. Your insightful contemplation on the transformative power of raindrops, shaping valleys and encapsulating the very essence of our planet, unveils profound wisdom.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:33:00 AM
thanks, Sotto, for your kind and insightful observations and words. I agree. Great transformative powers are at hand with patience and persistence. Have a splendid day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 6:25:00 PM
This makes a great point. It defines the story of earth.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:31:00 AM
I agree, Hilda. Patience and persistence define the story of earth and man. enjoy your day, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 5:20:00 PM
Ironically, I'm listening to 'Have You Ever Seen the Rain.' It makes everything lush. Loved it, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:30:00 AM
that's a beautiful song and a fitting listen as you read my poem. Thanks for your visit and kind words, Lin. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/1/2024 5:03:00 PM
Amazingly true, Monoku, Sara. And sometimes into a Grand Canyon. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:30:00 AM
thank you my dear hubby. Ah, the value of persistence! That's what we do best, right?

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