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On a Picnic

Weekend plans were made They have decided To have a picnic He chose a nice area It was a short drive Into the country The weather perfect Sun shinning bright Puffy white clouds seen A beautiful day for A picnic lunch made Upon a grassy hill

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Mohamed Omar

Date: 8/31/2021 1:12:00 PM

You really made me feel it . Thanks .

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2021 3:01:00 PM

Hello Mohamed. I am glad to hear it. blessings my friend.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 8/12/2021 7:52:00 AM

i visualized you there under the tree. Uplifting write. Thank you, Nancy

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2021 9:54:00 AM

Hello Nancy, Thank you for the lovely comment. I also visualizes myself there I also visualizes myself with another person on this picnic. Enjoy your day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/7/2021 5:10:00 PM

You have penned about a time that was a celebration of simpler things.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2021 6:22:00 AM

Hello Caren, yes Caren those were simple times. Hugs

Emilia James

Date: 8/3/2021 8:37:00 AM

Always enjoyed a picnic, not had one in ages though. Enjoyed your poem Darlene, Emilia.

Emilia James
Date: 8/3/2021 1:43:00 PM

Is very nice to meet you too Darlene. Emilia : )

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2021 10:09:00 AM

Hello Emilia James, so niece to meet you. Emi;ia i have not been on a picnic in ages either. It is nce to meet you. thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

C L Sivaranjani

Date: 7/31/2021 5:50:00 AM

Hi Darlen Mam, I am Sivaranjani... I viewed ur comments. Nice meeting you. Thank you a lots for ur boosting words Your poem 'On a picnic' is nice, a perfect picnic.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2021 11:04:00 AM

Hello C.L. Sivaranjani, so nice to meet you Sivaranjani, Thank you for the lovely comment on my poetry. I will be reading your poems. Enjoy your day my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/28/2021 9:35:00 AM

This is cool. I wrote something similar long ago. Well done, Darlene Panagiota

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2021 12:17:00 PM

Hello Panagiotqa, oh! I enjoyed picnics. Now it is part of my past. Hugs xx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/27/2021 3:34:00 PM

Sounds like a romantic picnic on a grassy hill. Nicely written. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2021 4:00:00 PM

Hello Phyills Babcock, yes it is for a couple on a picnic. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/25/2021 6:39:00 PM

Those puffy clouds are just right for a picnic party on a grassy knoll, Darlene! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2021 4:02:00 PM

Hello Gershon, yes those puffy clouds are just right for a picnic on a grassy knoll.Enjoy your evening my friend.

Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 7/25/2021 5:55:00 AM

Nostalgic. It hard to believe picnics are a thing of the past. They were something eagerly looked forward to and fun to engage in. Nice verse.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/25/2021 10:54:00 AM

Hello Denis Spilchuk, yes it is sad that picnics are the thing of the past. I enjoyed them and miss them. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your day my friend.

Constance La France

Date: 7/23/2021 9:33:00 AM

Darlene, a lovely scene you have penned, I miss picnics in the country on a nice day ~ love and serenity _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2021 11:24:00 AM

Hello Constance, I have not been on a picnic in many years. So I miss picnics ooff a country road to. Love and Serenity. - Darlene

Garima Dubey

Date: 7/22/2021 2:53:00 AM

I wish that this lockdown ends soon so I can go on a picnic as well with my family.Lovely poem Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2021 6:13:00 AM

duHello Garima Dubev so nice to meet you. Dubev, I haave not been on a picnic for the longest time. I miss going on a picnic. I hope you get to go on a picnic with your family soon. Enjoy your day Dubev.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/20/2021 11:46:00 AM

You made me feel I had gone to picnic and sat on grass. Wonderful write friend. How is the robin. Wish I could see pictures of the kids.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/21/2021 7:28:00 AM

Hello Rama, oh thank you, for the lovely comment. The robin has laid her eggs. She now feeds her babies. I enjoy to watch them. Blessings my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/20/2021 11:22:00 AM

So lovely and wonderful Darlene; I wish all days could be this simple and easy.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/21/2021 7:26:00 AM

Hello Caren, I wiish also for smiple days to be like this one. Hugs

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/20/2021 10:53:00 AM

A simple picnic but oh so very enjoyable...Delice

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/21/2021 7:25:00 AM

Hello D3lice, yes Delice an enjoyable picnic. Enjoy your day my fridnd.

Plabi Pradhan

Date: 7/20/2021 9:41:00 AM

Sounds amazing. Missing the old normal days before pandemic.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/21/2021 7:24:00 AM

Hello Plabi yes Plabi those were the normal days before the pandemic. I hope4 all is well with you. enjoy your day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/20/2021 8:35:00 AM

It sounds so lovely Darlene just like your poem! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/20/2021 1:15:00 PM

Hello Mike Gentile, for the couple it was a lovely day. I have not been on a picnic for the longest time. Happy Tuesday. xxx-oooo.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/19/2021 10:54:00 PM

I would love a picnic but in any season except summer. Lovely write. Blessings

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/20/2021 1:13:00 PM

Hello Victor, i would love a picnic. In the summer is just fine with me. I have not been on one in a long time. Blessings.

David Mchattie

Date: 7/19/2021 4:07:00 PM

Sounds like a wonderful day. It is way too hot up here to go outside in the afternoon but there is still lots of summer left. Hopefully it cools off a bit. Lovely poem indeed. Have a great day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/20/2021 1:11:00 PM

Hello David McHattie, It is hot and humid here to. It was for the couple having a picnic. They enjoyed their day. I know that tonight it will cool down. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2021 12:49:00 PM

A wonderful write with a wonderful day. Let's go. I am ready for a picnic lunch. Have a blessed day............

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/19/2021 3:33:00 PM

Hello Paula, okay lets go!! Have a blessed day my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/18/2021 5:36:00 PM

Sounds lie a perfect day and a perfect place. Love it. Hope the food is as good as the rest. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/19/2021 5:56:00 AM

Hello Judy Ball, They had a wonderful picnic together. Enjoy yor day my friend. She made the food for their day together. Blessings my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/18/2021 3:56:00 PM

Sounds perfect, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2021 5:28:00 PM

Hello Kim. thank you for a lovely comment. I wish i were on that picnic. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/18/2021 3:48:00 PM

Great poem Darlene, nothing better than a picnic on a grassy hill with loved ones. I enjoyed reading this poem. My kindest regards and wishes

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2021 5:27:00 PM

Hello Tayeb Lasaad, I want to thak you for a lovely comment. I love picnics. Enjoy your evening my frend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/18/2021 12:52:00 PM

No better thing to do than have a picnic on a lovely summer day. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2021 3:16:00 PM

Hello Tom, I use to go on picnics and enjoyed them. They were a lot of fun. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/18/2021 12:24:00 PM

Sounds like a lovely way to pass a day with loved ones. Beautiful writing!!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/18/2021 3:19:00 PM

Hello Joe DiMno, yes it is a lovely way to spend time with a love one. Thank you Joe. Thank you Joe enjoy your evening my frend.