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Old Valentine's Underwear

Thanks to my Sister, master of poetry I have a Valentine's offer to remember Should u spy someone with open fly Ask, "I'd love to borrow your underwear" CAUTION: If ViCTIM'S FACE BECOMES CONTORTED, it's wiser to RUN TO FREDERICKS OR VICTORIAS SECRET.

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/12/2022 3:33:00 PM

Terrific posting! I love your humor, Anil. It's slightly risque here, but never offensive. So well written. All the best, Brian

Valsa George

Date: 2/4/2022 6:35:00 PM

Ha... ha ! Oh.... Anil ! This is tit for a tat...in a pleasant way ! Never thought my poem would rouse your poetic imagination in this way. Enjoyed the humor, brother !

Anil Deo
Date: 2/4/2022 7:55:00 PM

You saved me ( otherwise, this underwear things seems out of the blue. To those who didn't first read you!) ThanX & Praise Gid in Jesus

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/4/2022 6:14:00 PM

I might say 'I'd prefer not to stare at your underwear' but that might not be very tactful~

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/4/2022 10:43:00 AM

You are so humorous! Embarrassing moment indeed! :)Paulette

Anil Deo
Date: 2/4/2022 6:02:00 PM

Paulette, fact is, Valsa George talked about How to nicely shut an open fly. I just applied my mind to the problem in season of Love/ Valentine's. Thx for visiting & commenting. Anil

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/4/2022 7:37:00 AM

I don't think so Anil, very funny! Good Day!

Anil Deo
Date: 2/4/2022 9:49:00 AM

Then run another risk: embarrass the person & say, your zipper is unzipped. I was being kind of kind & diplomatic ... So the person might look at things my way / our way & fix matters. Ahhh well, one can try ....