Anil Deo Poet Light Verse

Old Valentine's Underwear

Thanks to my Sister, master of poetry
I have a Valentine's offer to remember
Should u spy someone with open fly
Ask, "I'd love to borrow your underwear"

CAUTION: If ViCTIM'S FACE BECOMES CONTORTED, it's wiser to RUN TO FREDERICKS OR VICTORIAS SECRET.

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Brian Sambourne February 12, 2022 at 3:33 PM Terrific posting! I love your humor, Anil. It's slightly risque here, but never offensive. So well written. All the best, Brian

Valsa George February 4, 2022 at 6:35 PM Ha... ha ! Oh.... Anil ! This is tit for a tat...in a pleasant way ! Never thought my poem would rouse your poetic imagination in this way. Enjoyed the humor, brother ! Anil Deo February 4, 2022 at 7:55 PM You saved me ( otherwise, this underwear things seems out of the blue. To those who didn't first read you!) ThanX & Praise Gid in Jesus

Michelle Faulkner February 4, 2022 at 6:14 PM I might say 'I'd prefer not to stare at your underwear' but that might not be very tactful~

Paulette Calasibetta February 4, 2022 at 10:43 AM You are so humorous! Embarrassing moment indeed! :)Paulette Anil Deo February 4, 2022 at 6:02 PM Paulette, fact is, Valsa George talked about How to nicely shut an open fly. I just applied my mind to the problem in season of Love/ Valentine's. Thx for visiting & commenting. Anil

I Am Anaya February 4, 2022 at 7:37 AM I don't think so Anil, very funny! Good Day! Anil Deo February 4, 2022 at 9:49 AM Then run another risk: embarrass the person & say, your zipper is unzipped. I was being kind of kind & diplomatic ... So the person might look at things my way / our way & fix matters. Ahhh well, one can try ....