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Old Age

Old age is a number filled with many years,
years filled with both good and bad.
Why not smell the flowers daily,
make every day better and better.
Put a smile on your face and other's.
enjoy what you have and your tomorrows.
Date Written: 3/6/2022
1 Place
A BRIAN STRAND 1096 Contest Judged: 3/26/2022
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/27/2022 9:40:00 AM
Hi Paula, wise words, very much enjoyed your peaceful poem!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 10:31:00 AM
Thanks for writings. It is an honor to have this Old Age win. Glad you like these wise word and write. Have a blessed day/week.................
Date: 3/27/2022 5:33:00 AM
"make every day better and better" - Truly. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2022 10:29:00 AM
Thanks for writings and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this Old Age win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day/week.................
Date: 3/17/2022 2:31:00 PM
I agree, Paula. Slow down and smell the roses. yes, every day. :-) Hugs, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 12:49:00 PM
Thanks for writings. Glad you like my age write. Age is just a number. Yes, slow down and smell the flowers. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................
Date: 3/9/2022 5:47:00 AM
Paula never a truer word spoke, we are who we are with a number relevant to each one of us. Life is so sweet, enjoy this transient life with respect and trust and faith. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/9/2022 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for writings. Glad you enjoyed this write. Age is only a number. Take a lower number and be younger. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 3/8/2022 8:39:00 PM
A very inspiring write, Paula ! This is exactly the attitude one should develop in old age ! Best of luck in the contest !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/9/2022 1:39:00 PM
Thanks for writings and for your best of luck. Glad you like this write. Age is only a number. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 3/8/2022 7:26:00 PM
So uplifting your beautiful words are, Paula! Enjoyed immensely
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/9/2022 1:37:00 PM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Smiles are free and can be uplifting to others. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 3/8/2022 9:56:00 AM
Always trying to make my family and friends smile, it makes life worthwhile, I enjoyed your poem today
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/9/2022 1:35:00 PM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this fun age write. Yes, smiles are free and fun to give out. Here is a smile for you. Did you catch it??? Have a blessed day...................
Date: 3/7/2022 6:41:00 AM
Good advice! Though my sense of smell is not quite the same, and my nostrils refusing to take all of the blame; and when smiling the Botox holds firm like a mask, the dawn trying its best, though an immovable task.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thanks for writings. Glad you like this old age write. Age is just a number. Pick one. I am 23. hahahaha. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 3/6/2022 4:26:00 PM
So true Paula, we have to be young at heart, best wishes in the Contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2022 8:02:00 AM
Thanks for writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like this age write. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 3/6/2022 12:03:00 PM
very nice one with positivity, Paula. Hope you are having a nice weekend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2022 8:01:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...................

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