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No Chance For Pretense

I vividly recall the dream, of the moment, I first saw your face Unsettled, quite smitten, my mind became an empty space Words tripped over, then skipped out, along with my voice Like a bashful school girl meeting her first crush, I lost my poise The fine, white, sun baked sand, like sugar, glistened Lost in thought, building sand castles, I listened Soothing sounds from crashing waves, seduced me into sleep As cool mists from crested waves hungrily licked my pretty bare feet I turned, to watch the seagulls, and there you stood, in the distance, staring In that moment, quite unafraid, I stared right back, admiring With each step towards me, this silly heart begged wings to fly Before long, we stood face to face, knowing steamy summer love had arrived Abruptly, I averted my eyes, from alluring smile, your eyes, too intense Steamy heat invaded this body, leaving no chance for pretense

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2013 3:07:00 PM
beautiful romantic write, dear Audrey
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Date: 7/27/2013 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Jack...I'm still waiting on the report from Google...so far it seems ok. Will email tomorrow. Take care x
Date: 8/15/2010 5:53:00 PM
enjoyed reading today...
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:01:00 PM
Wonderful to hear from u BBF.. does this mean u finalized your contest and winner list is posted? if so what page is it on? glad u have a computer again..yes? am in Italy now to get ready for wedding on the 22nd.. luv.. arrived last night.. so let me know.. ciao.. yeah..luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:25:00 PM
Love your Sonnet Audrey, thank you for my placement in your contest as well, made my day :) , love Wilma
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:15:00 PM
a lovely sonnet Audrey. Thank you for my 4th place win in your contest. I am so pleased. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:07:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest, Dimples. I hope you'll be posting some new work when you find the time. Much love always, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:44:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem, Audrey, really lovely. .and thanks so much for my second place win in your first contest, I really appreciate it, and I hope you will sponsor many more~~
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Date: 8/5/2010 12:37:00 PM
AWESOME! Audrey. A GREAT SONNET. lOVE, lAINIE
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Date: 7/31/2010 11:07:00 PM
the feeling of a very true love. sounds very sweet, Audrey. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/29/2010 11:52:00 AM
A wonderful contest u had.. I see the placement listed however u need to go back into the poetry administrator to finalize it so the winners list will post under the Contests heading.... if u need help let me know BBF..with luv... your BBF...
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Date: 7/25/2010 9:24:00 AM
Awesome Sonnet, Audrey, so nicely penned! And thanks for your commenst! Keep your pen flowing and have agreat week!..Love, Gert
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:20:00 PM
Congrats! Lovely write.
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:52:00 PM
very very very great sis!
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:33:00 PM
Wow, you nailed it with this one. Enjoyed -Charles
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:55:00 AM
You captured that moment to perfection, Audrey...very romantic and passionate for sure! I can see why this one's a winner! - Tim
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations Audrey on your well deserved win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 3:25:00 AM
Audrey - CONGRATULATIONS on your big win for your Sonnet - this is awesome. Luv Kelly
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:54:00 PM
VERY VERY nice. Glad to see you scored so high with this very descriptive poem, Audrey. Congtatulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/18/2010 5:24:00 PM
enjoyed reading, thanks for your congrats and well wishes!! I am sleeping better now that is a big help!
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Date: 7/18/2010 12:12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one packed full of descriptions and emotions...Congratulations on your earned win...Sara
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:49:00 AM
Congrats my BBF oin your winning poem in the ladies part of Steamy Summer Love.. a beautiful write.. enjoy ..with luv..
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:45:00 AM
Good luck BBF in the contest with this fantastic Sonnet and its rare beauty.. how is your own contest going my friend??? good luck to in judging.. with luv..
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Date: 7/17/2010 9:58:00 AM
Hi Sweetie, hope you'll enter the quick Anti Slam Limericks contest! Four of 15 entries received within 40 minutes! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/16/2010 5:16:00 AM
A beautiful new day, many wonderful new poems to read of which yours is among,the weekend is upon us. What more could I ask for? I hope you have a fantastic weekend filled with love, happiness, and lots of inspiration Audrey. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2010 2:49:00 AM
Wow! That is all I can say. Great writing Audrey. Love, Lainie
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