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Near Death Experience

Have you ever thought about dying,
many have and many have not.
~The Accident~
Would it be an accident,
that would cause the mind blowing experience.
The car I did not see,
one that could not stop.
Would I lay there waiting for help,
help before I would bleed out.
Could it be a miss step on the tall latter,
going down~down onto the hard concrete floor.
Out like a light,
I see heaven going by and can not catch it.
~Sickness~
I thought it was just a common cold,
it turned into pneumonia.
At home many drugs,
it then turned into a long hospital stay.
Could it be the time a doctor said,
you have twenty-four hours to live.
You prayed all night,
just to see the light of day.
Near death experience,
many have had one or more.
Many have had none at all,
therefore they cannot understand it.
Date Written: 4/26/2022
5 Place
Note: Just a write...................
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Date: 5/9/2022 4:33:00 AM
I'm glad you were able to surmount those difficult times my dear friend Paula. Such a wonderful and inspiring write sharing your experience. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always my dear friend. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2022 9:00:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you found this to be a wonderful and inspiring write. It was just a write. Not True. Have a blessed day/week......................
Date: 5/8/2022 10:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win Paula ! Thank God, you were fortunate to have come out of all such harassing experiences.... !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2022 8:58:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this one. It was just a write. Have a blessed day/week......................
Date: 5/8/2022 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Paula, you really deserve this win. You crafted such a stunning poem.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2022 7:53:00 PM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day/week......................
Date: 5/8/2022 9:03:00 AM
Paula, that's very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2022 11:53:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this Near Death Experience write. Have a blessed day/week......................
Date: 5/7/2022 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Paula. You wrote a great poem. Blessings
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2022 11:52:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day/week......................
Date: 5/5/2022 10:45:00 AM
This is highly interesting "I see heaven going by and can not catch it."
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2022 9:21:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit. Glad you found this to be a highly interesting write. I want to catch heaven. Enjoy this blessed spring day/weekend........................
Date: 4/26/2022 10:22:00 PM
During a life span there are many occasions when one sees death face to face ! Pneumonia is something that adversely affects one as it lessens the immunity ! Hope you are perfectly healthy now, dear Paula ! Love and Blessings dear !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 1:40:00 PM
Thank You, for your visit. Glad you like this write. It was just a write. Enjoy this blessed spring day/week........................
Date: 4/26/2022 3:58:00 PM
Something to think about, Paula. You did well to cover the most common situations. Have a great week my friend, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 1:38:00 PM
Thank You, for your visit. Glad you like it. Enjoy this blessed spring day/week........................
Date: 4/26/2022 11:40:00 AM
You are so on-target, Paula. Those who have not experienced it find it very difficult to understand. Thanks for sharing!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2022 12:52:00 PM
Thank You, for your visit. We only understand what we know. Enjoy this blessed spring day........................

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