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"Has solitude ever led your steps down a forest path . . . " Quote by Constance La France Where crickets chirp and birds harmonize With leaves who breathe in… rich colors, hues Burgundy whispers and amber mysteries, Dancing through time, imitating the rhymes Discovered in the lights, rays passing by… Satisfying smiles, nature’s insights Into the soul who knows The abundance of words, even unheard… Can never erase the sights and sounds Pouring from the earth, breathing inspiration Freeing the imagination… for the luxury of love Glowing in the starlight shimmers, abiding In the intimate glimmers of sunshine smiles, Everlasting serenity flowing through the flames, Burning away the past’s blaze, the doubts, The dread, the fears and tears… all wiped away By the hand of nature’s moist rain, her soothing Grace, abiding in the air… Carrying away the melancholy night, In hands far surer than any doctor’s knife, Dissecting my life, cutting away the sacrifice It is in the sigh of lavender violets, Tender caresses of dandelion, vibrating hope Answering the prayers of a heart who is… Silenced by the echoes of freedom, Fulfilling the desires inside the dreams, The insecurities left to swim… In pools of darkness, dimmed By mossy rocks, slippery Praising as the oaks, the pine…. Promising no soul is left behind Picture the flow of a quiet stream, Graceful, gushing, growing… fluid feelings Running over the moments, sinuous waves Inspiring the serenity of a place, nature’s tears Fall soft against the beginnings of something So real, so real that the silence speaks… Shouting, screaming, screeching Crying out to the rich earth… Is the heart ready? Can the mind ever know…. The meaning within a dewdrop, tender and slow Dipping the petal in the forest’s surreal pull… Will God ever release my heart from the concrete Pavement B L A C K and defeating my hope… While my invisible tears blend with the sigh of sprays Dampening the woody memories, the prayers Who honor nature’s trembling rays as they pour across Spirits, believing the wild… the creatures, the character… Growing old in the reflections, the presence Softly stirring the muse to life Nature’s persona writes the twinkle in my eyes When I smile… she lifts an approving brow… The wispy wish of a passion for His gifts The Creator’s art is in this – nature’s bliss WRITING CHALLENGE - ''V'' Forms Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Form Chosen: Verse Theme Chosen: Nature November 14, 2022

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Date: 11/30/2022 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2022 10:12:00 AM
Gina, a beautiful Verse poem, I love it and the image. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, V Forms inspired by my quote, well done, blessings
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Date: 11/23/2022 8:40:00 PM
"The Creator’s art is in this – nature’s bliss" - Beautiful.
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Date: 11/16/2022 5:04:00 AM
Beautifully written, Gina. Well worthy on POTD. Congratulations dear friend. Blessings...Charlie x
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Date: 11/16/2022 4:26:00 AM
Gina, such beautiful writing here! With such vivid and clear imagery, I can see every line come to life! No wonder you were bestowed the POTD honor!! I am happy fo you! xxoo
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Date: 11/15/2022 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations, beautiful smile Regina McIntosh, on your POTD!
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Date: 11/15/2022 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Gina. Enjoy the honor!
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Date: 11/15/2022 11:38:00 AM
"Glimmers of sunshine smiles." Your entire poem leaves me in awe, but this thought caught my attention right away. :) Nature inspires us in so many wonderful ways. Your words are beautiful, tender and so uplifting. Congratulations Regina, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 11/15/2022 10:44:00 AM
Gorgeousness Gina, gorgeousness. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD!
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Date: 11/15/2022 7:44:00 AM
Nature is presented at its very best ! Beautiful images gleaming in serenity and splendor. Congratulations Gina on your well deserved POTD
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Date: 11/15/2022 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Gina, on your POTD with this most beautiful serene poem portraying Nature's bliss. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 11/15/2022 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Gina, you've shared the bliss of nature's bliss with us. Your imagery is beautiful and the depth of your words touches my heart and soul. Words to reflect upon as we allow God and nature's bliss to commune with out soul. A FAV for me, my friend. Enjoy your special day as we have enjoyed your special poem. Good luck in the contest ... to everyone else :-) Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 11/15/2022 6:10:00 AM
Love the interweaving of the personal and the Divine, the micro and macrocosmic interaction. Congrats on POTD, Regina. ~ Nature's Bliss, Gershon
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Date: 11/15/2022 5:32:00 AM
Wonderful write Gina, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 11/15/2022 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD. Enjoy :)
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Date: 11/15/2022 4:47:00 AM
An amazing write, Gina, as always. Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 11/15/2022 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations Gina, on a beautiful metaphorically written POTD, exquisitely penned, cuts into the soul, cheers David
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Date: 11/15/2022 3:02:00 AM
Gina, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/15/2022 1:55:00 AM
Gina this is a masterpiece of a poem, your P.O.T.D so deserved. Congratulations my friend, enjoy the honor. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/15/2022 1:48:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Gina :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Date: 11/15/2022 1:35:00 AM
Very serene, beautiful poetry Gina, you’ve created a lovey scene to read. Congratulations on poem of the day, enjoy the honour it’s well deserved… Belle
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Date: 11/15/2022 12:32:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Gina, congratulations on a well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 11/14/2022 12:25:00 PM
Beautiful, sorrowful, and yet hopeful....your last lines "Nature’s persona writes the twinkle in my eyes When I smile… she lifts an approving brow…The wispy wish of a passion for His gifts The Creator’s art is in this – nature’s bliss" There it is, the conclusion, the gift for all seasons is God's gift to all who will see it, the beauty of nature. You are so beautiful, Regina, your poet's heart is astounding. FAVE again, but is that a surprise? Beautiful write!
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