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My Beloved

MY BELOVED...how ever did I find a connection to my b o d y and m i n d. When my eyes first met yours I was so blind, you offered me a gracious heart, so kind. Before our romantic love was defined, I swear the LORD above had it designed. For your soul and my heart became entwined, and we’ve become passion and grace combined. On our wedding day the paper was signed and through the grey years our desire refined. Before death takes me away please remind me that our LOVE outweighs ...that of m a n k i n d. MY BELOVED has inspired p a s s i o n over two decades plus, expressing my gratitude to the LORD for him I have not the ability- With all the h e l l life brings, all I need to believe in is us, if deserved a win I shall accept with q u i e t humility- For because of his LOVE I’ve seen life’s adoring fragility. Original Contest: CONTEST NO 215 any form-theme max of 14 lines Date Judged: October 2, 2016 Date Written: August 22, 2016 Date re-posted: November 12, 2016 For the Contest: Take The Dagger From My Heart, Please -3 Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 12/8/2016 9:45:00 PM
Congrats on the top spot Laura. Nicely done.
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Date: 12/8/2016 8:42:00 AM
Laura, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem, I just L.O.V.E. it not just for the words and the creative layout, but for the emotion, well done ~
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Date: 12/8/2016 2:21:00 AM
Very. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Date: 12/7/2016 10:12:00 PM
Laura, this is lovely and a much deserved win! 7+ Hugs, Kim
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Date: 12/7/2016 5:14:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your write well done. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/7/2016 3:16:00 PM
Like the rhyming marathon in the first stanza! Congrats! :-)
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Date: 12/7/2016 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations LuLoo, well done...
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Date: 12/7/2016 11:27:00 AM
A WONDERFUL poem, congratulations :)
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Date: 8/30/2016 9:57:00 PM
Congrats Laura to win on wonderful poem.
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Date: 8/30/2016 3:07:00 PM
How very romantic, Laura!! Yours is indeed a special love. Congratulations on yet another podium finish. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/30/2016 1:17:00 AM
Luloo, this beautiful, beautiful, romantic poem is tops for me! It contains what true love must encompass for a lasting life together. Kudos on your win! I am honored to have my poem in your company! 7+ ; )
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Date: 8/30/2016 12:07:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 8/29/2016 7:14:00 PM
Hi Laura, This was sooo romantic. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved ;-) Alexis
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Date: 8/29/2016 6:35:00 PM
Congratulationss on this romantic monorhyme, Laura.
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:22:00 PM
This is lovely, Laura. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:17:00 PM
Congrats!!! Laura...beautifully done...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/29/2016 2:42:00 PM
Just a beautiful, heartfelt write, congrats on your fine win!
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Date: 8/24/2016 10:59:00 AM
This is nice and absolutely beautiful. I love every it of this piece of yours and I am happy reading from the creativity of your wonderful mind after a long period of time.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/25/2016 11:09:00 AM
Funom! Hey! I've missed you :) thanks dear friend :)-luloo
Date: 8/23/2016 12:38:00 AM
Great write, well done
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/23/2016 4:00:00 PM
many thanks James :)-luloo
Date: 8/22/2016 12:13:00 PM
lovely romantic monorhyme Luloo good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/22/2016 12:34:00 PM
thanks for the heads up! lol :)-luloo

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