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Mountain Senryu Or Haiku Series 022021

I Hamid spoke of a mountain See the forest of Poetry II poets plow semi-aridity with integrity among words III sometimes silent, oft not mountains imitate Existence Zen obedience

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/17/2021 12:46:00 AM

Hi , a deep poem my friend, a write within the mind's eye which delivers a message from the conscious and the unconscious part of our busy poetic brains. Congratulations on your very deserved POTD - Hope you enjoyed the honor, Hugs and blessings erenie, shalom. Jennifer

Anil Deo
Date: 11/20/2021 7:19:00 AM

Thank you dear Friend; Yes I id. Then wrote a thanks poem afterwards, overjoyed with meeting more poets because of POTD. shalom, shalom and Ereine

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/15/2021 4:40:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, Bill, with this deep musing on continuous contemplative consciousness correction

Anil Deo
Date: 11/20/2021 7:20:00 AM

thank you ever so much kind US

Debra L Brown

Date: 11/14/2021 9:13:00 PM

Congratulations, on your poem of the day win, Best Wishes ~ Debbie

Anil Deo
Date: 11/20/2021 7:20:00 AM

Debbie, thanks again, ever so kindly. shalom shalom / Peace of God

Cathy Strackbein

Date: 11/14/2021 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved!

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:12:00 PM

Bless You, Cathy

Constance La France

Date: 11/14/2021 2:21:00 PM

Anil, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:12:00 PM

Bless You, Old-timer Friend

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/14/2021 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations.. Panagiota xx

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:13:00 PM

Bless You. Panagiota Genius of Poetry

Ann Peck

Date: 11/14/2021 11:49:00 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations on POTD!

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:13:00 PM

Bless You, Ann.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/14/2021 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem of the day win. WOW!!! What a lovely Senryu write. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:15:00 PM

Bless You, Prolific Paula Goldsmith (love the last name/surname. O wordsmithing too)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/14/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thrilled to return with congratulations on POTD for your magical inspiring poem, it is well deserved-

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:16:00 PM

Michelle, your icon or profile picture is so comforting to see (even while denying us your beautiful facial features); did I ever mention I find thee a most generous soul? shalom, shalom and PAZ!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/14/2021 8:45:00 AM

Beautiful, indeed. Congratulations on your P. O. T. D.!

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:17:00 PM

Brother Hankins, I am honored by your visit and encouragement. shalom, shalom

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/14/2021 8:41:00 AM

I can hear the mountains singing in your word dear poet. Beautiful Haiku, congratulations on POTD honours my friend, xomo!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/14/2021 8:40:00 AM

I like the words “forest of poetry” imagine if every leaf on a tree represented a poem, what a harvest there would be, the wonderful fruits of the poets……. Congratulations on poem of the day Anil, well done, Belle

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:19:00 PM

Belle, dear Poet, you give such expansive and inspiring hints for more! shalom, shalom Kind Human Spirit and fellow Villager on PS. shalom, shalom

Anil Deo

Date: 11/14/2021 8:36:00 AM

Thank you all READERS and reader-commentators: it means a lot this time as in South Africa (evangelist here) we have so many brown outs, black outs, cell-phone issues (we buy airtime to call, and data to do internet ... about the most expensive in the world, I read last year). shalom shalom as I thanked commentators before this DATA ran out. LOL!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2021 7:48:00 AM

Profound penning, Anil. Much to ponder. Congrats on POTD. Contemplation and Reflection, Gershon

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:32:00 AM

bless U, dear Gershon, shining poet

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/14/2021 7:02:00 AM

Congrats Anil on poem of the day. Your vocabulary shines.

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:33:00 AM

Thanx much Vijay bhai, Namasthe. U are a better writer in many ways. shalom, shalom shanthi Om

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/14/2021 7:00:00 AM

"Zen obedience" is my favorite line Anil! I should study that! Congratulations on your POTD honors, Enjoy your day!!

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:33:00 AM

Thanx Mike, you made the day twice GRACED! amen and shalom-shalom

Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2021 6:58:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:34:00 AM

Eve, why thank you dear. If the POTF allows me to reconnect with poets like those commenting here, it is the BEST reward for me. Blessings and shalom, shalom

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/14/2021 4:11:00 AM

May poets never cease to plow the Lands of their words and sow in depth their beauty and zen feel.. Congratulations, Anil, on POTD honour! A pleasure to read your poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:32:00 AM

bless u dear

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/14/2021 12:40:00 AM

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 2:29:00 AM

shalom, shalom dear Tom: 2 comments and POTD. The universe seems CRAZZZZY! amen

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/14/2021 12:39:00 AM

Quite a thought provoking string of haiku Anil, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom

Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 2:28:00 AM

Tom, dear Poet, thanks so much. I never knew POTD status but U bring great tidings. Give me a rock, a stream, a tree ... I will live 100 years & make a mountain, if Jesus Tarries. amen

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/12/2021 7:05:00 PM

'Forest of poetry' and 'Integrity among words' - so speaks to us who humbly aspire to call ourselves poets - must add to my Faves~

Anil Deo
Date: 11/12/2021 8:47:00 PM

Dear Poet Michelle: once we talked about FAITH without "God," especially the Male Boss Type (in not so many words). But U always struck me as the person who never needed RELIGION because you have that FAITH that heals and gives, and creates beauty. Thanks for being so beautiful. Shalom, shalom