Mountain Senryu Or Haiku Series 022021

I
Hamid spoke of a mountain
See the forest
of Poetry

II
poets plow semi-aridity
with integrity
among words

III
sometimes silent, oft not
mountains imitate Existence
Zen obedience

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Date: 11/17/2021 12:46:00 AM
Hi , a deep poem my friend, a write within the mind's eye which delivers a message from the conscious and the unconscious part of our busy poetic brains. Congratulations on your very deserved POTD - Hope you enjoyed the honor, Hugs and blessings erenie, shalom. Jennifer
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/20/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thank you dear Friend; Yes I id. Then wrote a thanks poem afterwards, overjoyed with meeting more poets because of POTD. shalom, shalom and Ereine
Date: 11/15/2021 4:40:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Bill, with this deep musing on continuous contemplative consciousness correction
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/20/2021 7:20:00 AM
thank you ever so much kind US
Date: 11/14/2021 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations, on your poem of the day win, Best Wishes ~ Debbie
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/20/2021 7:20:00 AM
Debbie, thanks again, ever so kindly. shalom shalom / Peace of God
Date: 11/14/2021 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved!
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:12:00 PM
Bless You, Cathy
Date: 11/14/2021 2:21:00 PM
Anil, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:12:00 PM
Bless You, Old-timer Friend
Date: 11/14/2021 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations.. Panagiota xx
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:13:00 PM
Bless You. Panagiota Genius of Poetry
Date: 11/14/2021 11:49:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on POTD!
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:13:00 PM
Bless You, Ann.
Date: 11/14/2021 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day win. WOW!!! What a lovely Senryu write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:15:00 PM
Bless You, Prolific Paula Goldsmith (love the last name/surname. O wordsmithing too)
Date: 11/14/2021 8:47:00 AM
Thrilled to return with congratulations on POTD for your magical inspiring poem, it is well deserved-
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:16:00 PM
Michelle, your icon or profile picture is so comforting to see (even while denying us your beautiful facial features); did I ever mention I find thee a most generous soul? shalom, shalom and PAZ!
Date: 11/14/2021 8:45:00 AM
Beautiful, indeed. Congratulations on your P. O. T. D.!
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:17:00 PM
Brother Hankins, I am honored by your visit and encouragement. shalom, shalom
Date: 11/14/2021 8:41:00 AM
I can hear the mountains singing in your word dear poet. Beautiful Haiku, congratulations on POTD honours my friend, xomo!
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Date: 11/14/2021 8:40:00 AM
I like the words “forest of poetry” imagine if every leaf on a tree represented a poem, what a harvest there would be, the wonderful fruits of the poets……. Congratulations on poem of the day Anil, well done, Belle
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 5:19:00 PM
Belle, dear Poet, you give such expansive and inspiring hints for more! shalom, shalom Kind Human Spirit and fellow Villager on PS. shalom, shalom
Date: 11/14/2021 8:36:00 AM
Thank you all READERS and reader-commentators: it means a lot this time as in South Africa (evangelist here) we have so many brown outs, black outs, cell-phone issues (we buy airtime to call, and data to do internet ... about the most expensive in the world, I read last year). shalom shalom as I thanked commentators before this DATA ran out. LOL!
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Date: 11/14/2021 7:48:00 AM
Profound penning, Anil. Much to ponder. Congrats on POTD. Contemplation and Reflection, Gershon
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:32:00 AM
bless U, dear Gershon, shining poet
Date: 11/14/2021 7:02:00 AM
Congrats Anil on poem of the day. Your vocabulary shines.
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:33:00 AM
Thanx much Vijay bhai, Namasthe. U are a better writer in many ways. shalom, shalom shanthi Om
Date: 11/14/2021 7:00:00 AM
"Zen obedience" is my favorite line Anil! I should study that! Congratulations on your POTD honors, Enjoy your day!!
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:33:00 AM
Thanx Mike, you made the day twice GRACED! amen and shalom-shalom
Date: 11/14/2021 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:34:00 AM
Eve, why thank you dear. If the POTF allows me to reconnect with poets like those commenting here, it is the BEST reward for me. Blessings and shalom, shalom
Date: 11/14/2021 4:11:00 AM
May poets never cease to plow the Lands of their words and sow in depth their beauty and zen feel.. Congratulations, Anil, on POTD honour! A pleasure to read your poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 8:32:00 AM
bless u dear
Date: 11/14/2021 12:40:00 AM
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 2:29:00 AM
shalom, shalom dear Tom: 2 comments and POTD. The universe seems CRAZZZZY! amen
Date: 11/14/2021 12:39:00 AM
Quite a thought provoking string of haiku Anil, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/14/2021 2:28:00 AM
Tom, dear Poet, thanks so much. I never knew POTD status but U bring great tidings. Give me a rock, a stream, a tree ... I will live 100 years & make a mountain, if Jesus Tarries. amen
Date: 11/12/2021 7:05:00 PM
'Forest of poetry' and 'Integrity among words' - so speaks to us who humbly aspire to call ourselves poets - must add to my Faves~
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/12/2021 8:47:00 PM
Dear Poet Michelle: once we talked about FAITH without "God," especially the Male Boss Type (in not so many words). But U always struck me as the person who never needed RELIGION because you have that FAITH that heals and gives, and creates beauty. Thanks for being so beautiful. Shalom, shalom
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