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Mountain Senryu Or Haiku Series 022021

I
Hamid spoke of a mountain
See the forest
of Poetry

II
poets plow semi-aridity
with integrity
among words

III
sometimes silent, oft not
mountains imitate Existence
Zen obedience

Copyright © Anil Deo | Year Posted 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

November 17, 2021 at 12:46 AM

Hi , a deep poem my friend, a write within the mind's eye which delivers a message from the conscious and the unconscious part of our busy poetic brains. Congratulations on your very deserved POTD - Hope you enjoyed the honor, Hugs and blessings erenie, shalom. Jennifer

November 20, 2021 at 7:19 AM

Thank you dear Friend; Yes I id. Then wrote a thanks poem afterwards, overjoyed with meeting more poets because of POTD. shalom, shalom and Ereine

Unseeking Seeker

November 15, 2021 at 4:40 AM

Congrats on POTD, Bill, with this deep musing on continuous contemplative consciousness correction

November 20, 2021 at 7:20 AM

thank you ever so much kind US

November 14, 2021 at 9:13 PM

Congratulations, on your poem of the day win, Best Wishes ~ Debbie

November 20, 2021 at 7:20 AM

Debbie, thanks again, ever so kindly. shalom shalom / Peace of God

Cathy Strackbein

November 14, 2021 at 2:40 PM

Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved!

November 14, 2021 at 5:12 PM

Bless You, Cathy

Constance La France

November 14, 2021 at 2:21 PM

Anil, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

November 14, 2021 at 5:12 PM

Bless You, Old-timer Friend

Panagiota Romios

November 14, 2021 at 1:23 PM

Congratulations.. Panagiota xx

November 14, 2021 at 5:13 PM

Bless You. Panagiota Genius of Poetry

November 14, 2021 at 11:49 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations on POTD!

November 14, 2021 at 5:13 PM

Bless You, Ann.

Paula Goldsmith

November 14, 2021 at 8:51 AM

Congratulations on your poem of the day win. WOW!!! What a lovely Senryu write. Have a blessed day with your win...............

November 14, 2021 at 5:15 PM

Bless You, Prolific Paula Goldsmith (love the last name/surname. O wordsmithing too)

Michelle Faulkner

November 14, 2021 at 8:47 AM

Thrilled to return with congratulations on POTD for your magical inspiring poem, it is well deserved-

November 14, 2021 at 5:16 PM

Michelle, your icon or profile picture is so comforting to see (even while denying us your beautiful facial features); did I ever mention I find thee a most generous soul? shalom, shalom and PAZ!

L Milton Hankins

November 14, 2021 at 8:45 AM

Beautiful, indeed. Congratulations on your P. O. T. D.!

November 14, 2021 at 5:17 PM

Brother Hankins, I am honored by your visit and encouragement. shalom, shalom

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 14, 2021 at 8:41 AM

I can hear the mountains singing in your word dear poet. Beautiful Haiku, congratulations on POTD honours my friend, xomo!

November 14, 2021 at 8:40 AM

I like the words “forest of poetry” imagine if every leaf on a tree represented a poem, what a harvest there would be, the wonderful fruits of the poets……. Congratulations on poem of the day Anil, well done, Belle

November 14, 2021 at 5:19 PM

Belle, dear Poet, you give such expansive and inspiring hints for more! shalom, shalom Kind Human Spirit and fellow Villager on PS. shalom, shalom

November 14, 2021 at 8:36 AM

Thank you all READERS and reader-commentators: it means a lot this time as in South Africa (evangelist here) we have so many brown outs, black outs, cell-phone issues (we buy airtime to call, and data to do internet ... about the most expensive in the world, I read last year). shalom shalom as I thanked commentators before this DATA ran out. LOL!

November 14, 2021 at 7:48 AM

Profound penning, Anil. Much to ponder. Congrats on POTD. Contemplation and Reflection, Gershon

November 14, 2021 at 8:32 AM

bless U, dear Gershon, shining poet

November 14, 2021 at 7:02 AM

Congrats Anil on poem of the day. Your vocabulary shines.

November 14, 2021 at 8:33 AM

Thanx much Vijay bhai, Namasthe. U are a better writer in many ways. shalom, shalom shanthi Om

November 14, 2021 at 7:00 AM

"Zen obedience" is my favorite line Anil! I should study that! Congratulations on your POTD honors, Enjoy your day!!

November 14, 2021 at 8:33 AM

Thanx Mike, you made the day twice GRACED! amen and shalom-shalom

November 14, 2021 at 6:58 AM

Congratulations on POTD

November 14, 2021 at 8:34 AM

Eve, why thank you dear. If the POTF allows me to reconnect with poets like those commenting here, it is the BEST reward for me. Blessings and shalom, shalom

Besma Riabi Dziri

November 14, 2021 at 4:11 AM

May poets never cease to plow the Lands of their words and sow in depth their beauty and zen feel.. Congratulations, Anil, on POTD honour! A pleasure to read your poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.

November 14, 2021 at 8:32 AM

bless u dear

November 14, 2021 at 12:40 AM

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November 14, 2021 at 2:29 AM

shalom, shalom dear Tom: 2 comments and POTD. The universe seems CRAZZZZY! amen

November 14, 2021 at 12:39 AM

Quite a thought provoking string of haiku Anil, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom

November 14, 2021 at 2:28 AM

Tom, dear Poet, thanks so much. I never knew POTD status but U bring great tidings. Give me a rock, a stream, a tree ... I will live 100 years & make a mountain, if Jesus Tarries. amen

Michelle Faulkner

November 12, 2021 at 7:05 PM

'Forest of poetry' and 'Integrity among words' - so speaks to us who humbly aspire to call ourselves poets - must add to my Faves~

November 12, 2021 at 8:47 PM

Dear Poet Michelle: once we talked about FAITH without "God," especially the Male Boss Type (in not so many words). But U always struck me as the person who never needed RELIGION because you have that FAITH that heals and gives, and creates beauty. Thanks for being so beautiful. Shalom, shalom

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