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Forest shades wane, as the formidable moonlight chase, as ghost and goblins wander. In eerie shriek through briar and bramble bought amble rubbing against each other. Thundering growls are heard upon the ridge, as a coal steed rears for an interlude, over the immutable wooden bridge, tenuous brook babbles for solitude. Sketch of a bereft brittle man couldn't calm his racing heart to fight an evil force. He looked demurely with an airy qualm at the arcane and appalling dark horse. Distressed and troubled; O, heaven defend the frigid fear of Earth unblessed dead- end. 10/21/2017

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Date: 11/13/2017 8:21:00 PM
Such a creative and beautifully expressed poem Eve. An enthralling write and congrats on your excellent win!
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Date: 11/4/2017 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations and well done on your placement, Eve.
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Date: 11/3/2017 8:42:00 PM
Amazing write Eve, you really made this challenge come alive in this write, congrats on a great shared 2nd place win!
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Date: 10/29/2017 6:42:00 PM
wow, what a cliff hanger! You used the words very vividly, Eve. Well done.
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Date: 10/28/2017 11:43:00 PM
You got a nicely penned sonnet, Eve. And I like how you mixed those 8 challenging words in it. Kudos!
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Date: 10/28/2017 6:56:00 PM
smooth and powerful write, eve...you made all words blend together!,,huggs
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Date: 10/28/2017 12:04:00 PM
This is an amazing sonnet Eve, so difficult to incorporate all eight words but you have made it look so easy. :))
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Date: 10/27/2017 9:02:00 PM
This is a true testament of your talent my friend! You have conquered this contest and should easily be within the victor's list! I surely loved how you wrote this poem, with allure and powerful words of incredible sensibility! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/27/2017 6:19:00 PM
What a grand job you did! The picture is phenomenal!
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Date: 10/27/2017 5:32:00 PM
You met the challenge! Great write Eve!
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Date: 10/27/2017 5:01:00 PM
Well done with this challenge Eve. Good luck in the contest ! :)
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Date: 10/27/2017 4:05:00 PM
You wove the words in very well Eve, it really is quite a challenge John set us:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/27/2017 4:01:00 PM
Well done incorporating the difficult words into this lovely Sonnet--best for a win, Eve!
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Date: 10/27/2017 3:47:00 PM
Beautifully done Eve. Your use of these words, that seem difficult to me, look easy in this wonderful and extremely eerie poem. Much luck in the contest.
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