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In the flickering light of the lamp, Despite the chilly night, air so damp, She surveyed books so avidly read, Studied the guidelines now in her head. Time came: she departed for the war, Sure she'd care for all those wounded sore. Many followed as she left her stamp, At night she'd be the lady with the lamp.

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Date: 10/12/2023 4:10:00 PM
Hello Victor, congratulations on hour POTD. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\
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Date: 10/5/2023 4:00:00 AM
Dear Victor. Hi. You have not lost your voice. This was clever and creative. I liked the theme. As always, you deliver imagery and feeling. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. Have a wonderful afternoon. Love Blessings and Peace now and always. (smile)
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Date: 9/30/2023 8:00:00 AM
a beautiful tribute to Miss Nightingale. Where would we be without our own Florence Nightingales in our lives--those that bring light into our lives. Well done, Victor, Sara
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Date: 9/30/2023 7:33:00 AM
WoW! Victor, You’ve penned a well-written “ tribute” piece in honor of Miss Florence Nightingale. She paved the way for nurses worldwide. Years ago I was a nurse assistant. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well-deserved. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/26/2023 8:46:00 PM
Florence was a beautiful soul, congratulations on POTD, you honour her with this nice little poem:)
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Date: 9/26/2023 4:39:00 PM
A great person, amidst terrible war effects Victor..And where was that war.? And against Who.. ? And what do we hear today.? The same Country occupies Crimea..And the same Countries contest, that situation.' Does this Seem like a big fixed replay.? Well after those Who are dead, could shed more light on why It happens (then and now?)
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:13:00 PM
Dear Florence, now the nightingales sing/ to honor the healing you did bring! :)
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Date: 9/24/2023 4:48:00 AM
Florence Nightingale is a name that continues to thrill generations ! You have paid a great tribute to that noble lady with the lamp. Glad to see this inspiring poem chosen as Poem of the Day. Congratulations dear Victor!
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Date: 9/23/2023 8:50:00 PM
Wow! A very interesting couplet complete with a lovely picture of the lady with the lamp. Congratulations on another well deserved POTD, Victor. Old Duck.
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:28:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, Vic, and big congrats on potd. :)
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:58:00 AM
Dear Victor, the heartfelt beauty of your poem is only surpassed by the beauty and devotion of this loving woman and special soul herself, the "lady with the lamp", Miss Nightingale. A splendid tribute. Congratulations for the wonderful and worthy honor of POTD! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/22/2023 9:39:00 PM
The song of the male nightingale has been described as one of the most beautiful sounds in nature, inspiring songs, fairy tales, opera, books, and a great deal of poetry. Congratulations on your POTD, Victor! Florence Nightingale 's tribute treasure. :)
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Date: 9/22/2023 7:25:00 PM
Through your words, I'm able to learn more about her, and her story. This is so beautifully written and presented. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/22/2023 7:18:00 PM
A beautiful poem that I love to read and enjoyed immensely this morning my dear poet friend Victor. Big Congratulations on your POTD! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 9/22/2023 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on the POTD! I don't really know much about her but I think I know someone who has played the game. Congrats! -AG
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Date: 9/22/2023 5:00:00 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on POTD, Victor. An awesome poem!
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Date: 9/22/2023 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Victor, on your touching poem receiving honour of POTD. Well-written couplets with a memorable tribute to Lady with the Lamp.
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Date: 9/22/2023 12:28:00 PM
I'm back with heartfelt congratulations on POTD, Victor. An awesome poem!
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Date: 9/22/2023 11:30:00 AM
Great potd Vic. Not too familiar with her story but am aware of her legacy to a degree
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Date: 9/22/2023 11:16:00 AM
Great tribute to the greatest nurse. Very touchingly written. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/22/2023 9:14:00 AM
You have presented a great beauty in so wonderful eloquent couplets! Warmth, Light, generosity, devotion and Love.. deeply felt between your wonderful words and insightful thoughts.. Congratulations, Victor on POTD honour! Your work is worthy of acknowledgement and praise.. God bless your beautiful soul. Best regards.
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Date: 9/22/2023 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)
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Date: 9/22/2023 7:56:00 AM
Just lovely dear Victor. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! hugs :)
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Date: 9/22/2023 7:26:00 AM
Nicely written , congratulations POTD.
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Date: 9/22/2023 6:58:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your POTD, Victor. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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