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Mirror Reflection

I see her in reflection as the steam evaporates from the mirrored back splash behind the counter In front of me where I wait impatiently for my morning fix - coffee and a bagel. There she sits - alone at a table for two by the window Shaky hands lifting a paper cup to her quivering lips - haunted eyes starring at a newspaper she doesn’t see as her mind wonders through old memories. The pain is sharp as the blade of recognition enters my heart For it is now - with my back turned to her I clearly see her in the light of today- as the mirror reflection reverses the rolls we play She - now the child I – now the mother Oh! the tricks that time does play.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2010 11:09:00 AM
God Bless, Lainie. A touching poem. This one reaches the heart. Vince
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:29:00 AM
Very good work.Congrats for being a featured poet this week.
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:38:00 AM
Father time does play tricks... I remember my adolescent years like they were yesterday... Now a thirty year old man.... Still young, but reminiscent.... Good write friend... Congrats on the feature.....:JP]
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations Elaine, on having your warming heartfelt poem featured this week. It was an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 1/26/2010 7:56:00 AM
Wow! This is really food-for-thought! It's hell to get old...or is it?" Congrats on this super poem selection. Love, daver
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Date: 1/25/2010 11:18:00 AM
Many congrats on your well deserved feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:55:00 AM
Oh my....how I relate myself to this poem...It spoke to me!! I often reflect this way....(who is this person I see in the mirror or window reflection?)....So worthy to be featured this week Elaine...this is a wonderful insightful poem! Congratulations!~Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Elaine Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/24/2010 9:16:00 PM
Congrats Lainie on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. beautiful choice..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:50:00 PM
Sad reality for far too many. The emotion comes through your words. Congratuations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:25:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week..this is fine work and very emotional. BG
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:51:00 PM
Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Elaine >> James
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2009 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on making the semi finals and good luck. A very nice poem. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:57:00 AM
Lainie,Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Two poems making the grade that's really something, smile. Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/21/2009 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your first round contest success Elaine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/20/2009 5:39:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having two poems make it to the finals. Way to go my friend! Wishing you the best in the next round. Karen
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:49:00 PM
Congrats again for this entry, Lainie :) Wish you all the best :)
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:21:00 AM
How are they going to choose? this is fine too. Congrats! BG
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:21:00 AM
How are they going to choose? this is fine too. Congrats! BG
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:10:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Elaine >> James
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:35:00 PM
and also is me. i too am amazed at the times and the trick that was so hidden in plain sight all thes years. and now we live after just a taste. you are strumming my fate with your fingers. john h loving iii
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Date: 8/15/2009 9:20:00 AM
Typical excellence from one of the soup's very best. Where are you, Lainie? I look for you constantly. Please give us some more wonderful poetry. Love, daver
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Date: 7/16/2009 4:21:00 AM
Lainie, This is awesome. I love it. To my favs. Hope your novel is about complete. I miss you so much. Love and blessings to you and yours always my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2009 11:42:00 AM
This is such a poignat portrayal of our reality as adults. I think we have so much to learn from each other, and God isn't finished with us until we've experienced ALL aspects of love. Thanks for this, Lainie!
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