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Memory of Our Honeymoon

Happy was our first night of married life, Moonlight shined on your delightful visage, Face up, red lips slightly apart, smiling. I looked on a vision gratifying. Moonlight shined on your delightful visage, She walked slowly in a drowsy stupor, I looked on a vision gratifying, No hesitation to savor my prize. She walked slowly in a drowsy stupor, Divine love, how can I ever forget, No hesitation to savor my prize. Bliss and enchantment must last forever. Divine love, how can I ever forget, Face up, red lips slightly apart, smiling. Bliss and enchantment must last forever, Happy was our first night of married life.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/4/2025 2:30:00 AM

How beautiful Victor, what a treasured memory of your first night of wedded bliss… Beryl

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/15/2024 6:20:00 AM

first days are the best, touching poem

Paige Hind

Date: 10/13/2024 2:47:00 PM

I really like pantoums. You wrote beautiful memories in yours. Glad you had her...

Valsa George

Date: 10/13/2024 6:13:00 AM

Very romantic and beautiful dear Victor. Writing a pantoum is challenging. I have tried this poetic form only a couple of times. In loneliness, relishing such sweet memories can give a lift to life.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/13/2024 4:33:00 AM

Aw this is sweetly romantic! And it appears to be a very challenging format! Bravo Victor!

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/10/2024 1:39:00 PM

"Happy was our first night of married life." Indeed, a truly divine write. True love is forever. blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/9/2024 2:04:00 PM

Outstanding poem captures the joy and bliss of a newlywed couple on their first night together, emphasizing the beauty of love and the memorable moments that define a relationship.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2024 10:19:00 AM

- Beautiful romantic poem, Victor :) - hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/9/2024 8:18:00 AM

Excellent writing. I enjoyed this loving poem :)

Maria Williams

Date: 10/8/2024 10:57:00 PM

A delightful Pantoum dear Victor. Your poem reflects on the joy and enchantment of your first night of marriage. Using vivid imagery and repetition, it captures a sense of timeless love, reverence, and bliss....Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/8/2024 8:02:00 PM

Beautiful romantic tribute my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/8/2024 1:30:00 PM

This is a beautiful tribute, reflecting upon a happy time. I loved this tale of golden memory. Best of wishes. :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/8/2024 12:16:00 AM

Your wonderful tribute to your loving wife is magnificent, I feel how much you miss and loved her and know that one day you will be united again. I loved this poem Victor. Blessings, Jennifer.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/7/2024 1:55:00 PM

This is another of your beautiful, intriguing romantic poems. You have a very positive outlook. Best wishes. Looking forward to more of your writes.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/7/2024 1:55:00 PM

Victor your passion will always be within you from reading this passion filled Poem of yours. Love it my friend. thank you for your effort in writing and sharing.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2024 12:56:00 PM

what a delightfully romantic poems Victor I do enjoy the challenge of writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/7/2024 12:17:00 PM

Dreamy Victor, love it!