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She can't blame the season for her tears Aloneness was not loneliness in December When the season passed so quickly in disguise Of twinkling lights and toasts remembered As she looks to the yard, there is nothing to see but an old pepper tree, that tosses it's head It is losing its leaves in an alien wind, in a sea of dead grass, where a garden had been Her house wears a face, weathered thin, from neglect and a fence that is broken and needing repair She turns for a moment, to glance, here and there, a room she has known, filled with colors long dimmed, where the silence shouts loud, not a question to ask.... but...wishing for something..., a chore, or a task A family together, is framed on the desk Maybe they'll come today.... For a mere month or more, a feral cat came her door then had wandered the floors, neither friend or a foe But he soon disappeared, on the eve of the storm She will call just the same.......just in case he can hear "Here, kitty kitty"....."Here, kitty kitty", but she calls him in vain While the wind plays the same dirty game... Tumble weeds roll and bend, her eyes search the wind She peers through the window,...as she waits for a friend... a friend never there....always due to arrive so she stands by the side, of the old telephone where the old parlor room, knows a long afternoon A family together, is framed on the desk Maybe they'll come someday... ___________________________________________________________ Loneliness Contest Entry: Sponsored by Nadya Ivette Negron

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Date: 7/27/2016 4:52:00 AM
This reminds me of how we stay in the city for a long time, forgetting the people who raised us, and made us to be who we are today.... Congrats Carrie, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/24/2016 5:09:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your podium win for your poem in the 'loneliness' contest'! Hugs, Sandra P.S., I agree with Charlie too!
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Date: 7/24/2016 12:59:00 AM
Want to make a meaningful difference in one someone's life, visit a senior with dementia with no family. Hold their hand and read them a sweet poem or two. You'll be amazed of the emotions you will stir and the good you will feel...congratulations Dear Carrie for winning and bringing a proper attention...
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Date: 7/23/2016 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on the placement of the contest
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:28:00 PM
Yet another superb write Carrie.. ur words r powerful... congrats on first place win!
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Date: 11/8/2015 12:24:00 PM
Carrie oh my this was so sad. Beautifully penned and congratulations on your amazing win
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Date: 11/8/2015 12:50:00 AM
Oh, Carrie. You have such a way with words. Simply spellbinding.....the lines work together to weave this tale of loneliness and sorrow. Oh...it's so deserving of its place in the contest, dear. Congrats. :) Hugs
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Date: 11/7/2015 3:21:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your win in Freddie's contest. SKAT
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Date: 11/7/2015 1:12:00 PM
Awesome write! You captured what a lot of our seniors feel. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/7/2015 12:50:00 PM
Carrie, unbelievably good! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 11/7/2015 10:48:00 AM
Congratulation's Carrie on your win. It is sad the wealth the world ignores.
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Date: 11/7/2015 9:39:00 AM
Carrie, your poem touched my heart so deeply. I felt her pain as your imagery came to life...My heartfelt congratulations to you for your well-deserved First Place win. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/7/2015 9:02:00 AM
Carrie, it's easy to see why this heart-wrenching poem placed first! Congratulations Janice
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:13:00 AM
Carrie, this poem is quite visual; loneliness is real when one has lost the one they loved and shared life's moments. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/7/2015 7:34:00 AM
I am truly impressed, this is a sad but very effective write Carrie. Congratulations on your top spot.
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