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Maybe They Will Come

She can't blame the season for her tears
Aloneness was not loneliness in December
When the season passed so quickly in disguise
Of twinkling lights and toasts remembered

As she looks to the yard, there is nothing to see
but an old pepper tree, that tosses it's head
It is losing its leaves in an alien wind,
in a sea of dead grass, where a garden had been 

Her house wears a face, weathered thin, from neglect
and a fence that is broken and needing repair
She turns for a moment, to glance, here and there, 
a room she has known, filled with colors long dimmed,
where the silence shouts loud, not a question to ask....
but...wishing for something..., a chore, or a task

A family together, is framed on the desk
Maybe they'll come today....

For a mere month or more, a feral cat came her door
then had wandered the floors, neither friend or a foe
But he soon disappeared,  on the eve of the storm
She will call just the same.......just in case he can hear
"Here, kitty kitty"....."Here, kitty kitty", but she calls him in vain
While the wind plays the same dirty game...

Tumble weeds roll and bend, her eyes search the wind
She peers through the window,...as she waits for a friend...
a friend never there....always due to arrive
so she stands by the side, of the old telephone
where the old parlor room, knows a long afternoon

A family together, is framed on the desk
Maybe they'll come someday...
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Loneliness Contest Entry: Sponsored by Nadya Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kimathi Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:52 AM
This reminds me of how we stay in the city for a long time, forgetting the people who raised us, and made us to be who we are today.... Congrats Carrie, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your podium win for your poem in the 'loneliness' contest'! Hugs, Sandra P.S., I agree with Charlie too!
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:59 AM
Want to make a meaningful difference in one someone's life, visit a senior with dementia with no family. Hold their hand and read them a sweet poem or two. You'll be amazed of the emotions you will stir and the good you will feel...congratulations Dear Carrie for winning and bringing a proper attention...
Negron Flores Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 11:43 PM
Congratulations Carrie on the placement of the contest
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Yet another superb write Carrie.. ur words r powerful... congrats on first place win!
La France Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 12:24 PM
Carrie oh my this was so sad. Beautifully penned and congratulations on your amazing win
Manassian Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Oh, Carrie. You have such a way with words. Simply spellbinding.....the lines work together to weave this tale of loneliness and sorrow. Oh...it's so deserving of its place in the contest, dear. Congrats. :) Hugs
A  Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your win in Freddie's contest. SKAT
Roper Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Awesome write! You captured what a lot of our seniors feel. Congratulations on your win!
Cheema Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Carrie, unbelievably good! Congrats on your placement!
Beam Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Congratulation's Carrie on your win. It is sad the wealth the world ignores.
Haight Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Carrie, your poem touched my heart so deeply. I felt her pain as your imagery came to life...My heartfelt congratulations to you for your well-deserved First Place win. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 9:02 AM
Carrie, it's easy to see why this heart-wrenching poem placed first! Congratulations Janice
Ebbs Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Carrie, this poem is quite visual; loneliness is real when one has lost the one they loved and shared life's moments. Congrats on your win!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 7:34 AM
I am truly impressed, this is a sad but very effective write Carrie. Congratulations on your top spot.
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