Mallika

The beauty spot on your chin, never could I reach so close, close to your luscious wet lips, wish I were that spot! ===================== By:kashinath karmakar(3rd January 2011)

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Joe Inka

Date: 2/8/2011 11:02:00 PM

A heartfelt portrait of longing. Achieved to perfection in my opinion.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:56:00 PM

Congratulations, Kashinath. I give you a 7! Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 4:21:00 PM

Congrats.Sara

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/17/2011 2:04:00 PM

Great humour in this. Well done on your win:))

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/17/2011 11:09:00 AM

Hello Kashinath, Oh my, this is just so beautiful, congratulations on your win. I love this one As Always Shar

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/17/2011 10:57:00 AM

beautiful. congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Kashinath sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 9:07:00 PM

Very clever, Kashinath. Congratulations and many more wins. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/16/2011 8:29:00 PM

wow. many congratulations Kashinath.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2011 7:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win in John's contest, Kahinath! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/16/2011 6:02:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend... enjoyed every line ..as u enjoy another top ten success with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2011 6:01:00 PM

whooo, kashinath.. great stuff in all ways! thumbs up and cheers for the win! : ) nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/16/2011 3:46:00 PM

Smile, great thought Kashinath. Congratulations on your worthy 5th place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2011 3:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/16/2011 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, kashinath

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/16/2011 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2011 12:33:00 PM

Kashinath, thanks for your several comments to me today, and once again, I sure hope this one wins BIG in the contest. A big 7 for it!

John Freeman

Date: 1/15/2011 11:24:00 AM

Kashinath, thank you so much for your support of my contest. It certainly doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2011 9:16:00 PM

Kashinath, my Polish grandmother used to say "mallika" to describe milk. I don't know if it was your intent, but I could see a spot of luscious milk on this lover's lips. Where are you from, Kashinath? Your have perfect English grammar and spelling. Are you a native English speaker? Enjoyed your poem very much! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2011 7:54:00 PM

kashinath karmakar,,, enjoyed your poem,, if for contest,, good luck,..p.d.

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/4/2011 10:13:00 AM

Yes sensual indeed liked it thanks and yes good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/4/2011 7:41:00 AM

Very romantic and passionate work...If for a contest, wish the best of luck...Reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work made this morning brighter brought sunshine to the gray sky..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 1/4/2011 6:25:00 AM

"very exotic and sensual" I loved each word~~

Kash Poet

Date: 1/3/2011 11:12:00 PM

Thanks Dr.Mehta and Andrea for your comments. This is not for contest.In the spicy contest I have entered that top and jeans clad young lady.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2011 10:39:00 PM

Love it! A good one for unrequieted love!