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Making Unusual Friends

********** I once met a blue jay named Flyer Who hoped to be part of the choir When asked "Do a solo!" His voice warbled too low So he solos from trees that are higher He sat by a sparrow named Boris Who sang quite off-key in the chorus They gave him a chance To sing from a branch As long it's out in the forest! The birds gathered in the church steeple Complaints came from all the church people They couldn't delete them They couldn't defeat them So decided to be more congenial Bird singers were much too afraid To be baptized, rather than bathe While they declined to dip They were willing to sip But wonderful friendships were made ! The birds gathered in the bird-bath They watched pretty butterflies pass They couldn't delete them By trying to eat them "Would you like to join us?," they asked! The butterflies were also afraid But loved watching birds as they bathed They declined to dip So just took one sip And wonderful friendships were made ! ************

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/20/2014 5:50:00 PM
very enjoyable Carrie super pen congrats on win hugs
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Date: 11/19/2014 9:02:00 PM
really cute Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/19/2014 7:06:00 PM
Hi Carrie, I loved reading your cute fable in Limerick form and the great moral it conveyed. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 11/19/2014 2:34:00 PM
Never read this before but I love it. It's really sweet. Congratulations on your win Carrie.
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Date: 11/18/2014 6:49:00 PM
love the fact this was written in limerick form - very clever write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:30:00 PM
Great write, Carrie. Congrats. xxxRalph
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Date: 10/21/2011 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2011 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Carrie
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Date: 10/15/2011 8:31:00 PM
carrie ~, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for your wonderful H.M.. in my butterfly contest,..p.d.
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Date: 10/15/2011 8:06:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on HM with lovely lines of butterfly poetry luv..
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Date: 2/23/2011 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Limerick II". A well deserved win Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 6:01:00 AM
cheirping for you on your great wn, carrie.. congrats with huggs, :) nette
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Date: 2/8/2011 1:04:00 AM
Halarious! Carrie. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:26:00 PM
how cute, namingn birds in a chorus! Great job, Carrie, and I am glad to finally be able to see your entry. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/7/2011 8:52:00 PM
This is totally cool.Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/7/2011 8:07:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your 8th place win in Debbie's contest with this creative write my friend.. enjoy another top spot with luv..
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:27:00 PM
I liked this one, Carrie! Wonderfully humorous, great meter and it gave me the giggles (in the right key, of course). Congrats on your WIN in Deborah's contest. Hugs & best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:41:00 PM
Good one Rob! congratulations to you for this fine win
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Date: 2/7/2011 5:55:00 PM
A cute one Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/20/2011 10:49:00 AM
Hey, Carrie, I think these limericks are great. I see the meter maid has stopped by to offer suggestions so I don't know if I'm reading a revised version, but it all sounds perfect to me. I always place humor value first when reading limericks and both of yours get high points for wit! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:00:00 AM
Enjoyed the read, Carrie! Well done! Take care!...Gert
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Date: 1/20/2011 6:12:00 AM
a double treat for sure, carrie! impressive sonatas of which winsome limercks are made! best winning tidings for the contest..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/19/2011 8:21:00 PM
Wow how wonderful! These flow beautifully!!
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Date: 1/19/2011 7:06:00 PM
Two for the price of one! These are both remarkably written limericks.
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