Magic

There was something magical that night, Fairies flew around the green birches, Others glided up around the church's steeple, Until tired they rested in their perches. Below two lovers hugged on a small bench, Whilst fairies hummed a mellow melody, The magic worked in a great symphony, Their lips brushed softly, so heavenly. Alas, time passed and waited for no one. The fairies dispersed to their magic alley. The lovers hugged and walked home, A small cottage, full of magic of the valley.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/2/2024 2:04:00 AM

A lovely romantic story/poem Victor. Hope you are keeping well. Wishing you a very Happy New Year… Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 12/31/2023 5:44:00 PM

what an enchanting and romantic poem Victor:-) sending Happy New Year greetings my friend:-) I am hoping my muse has now returned:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Ball

Date: 12/25/2023 2:35:00 AM

What a romantically magical piece this is. I could feel it as I read. Nicely done my friend. Wonderful imagery as always. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2023 8:48:00 AM

A very romantic piece, Victor. I hope you are doing well. Merry Christmas, my friend. Blessings

Bill Baker

Date: 12/20/2023 3:01:00 PM

Nice enjoyable poetry, Victor, a fun and relaxing read, my friend. I want to wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! I hope all is well with you, Victor. Been missing you here at Poetry Soup, my friend. Bill

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 12/21/2023 2:29:00 AM

Wishing you the best of festivities. Victor

Tom Woody

Date: 12/15/2023 4:43:00 PM

Nice poem Week-tor

Deb M

Date: 12/14/2023 3:01:00 AM

Awww thats so beautiful Victor…so romantic and loving! You write romance so well! Cuddles…Debx

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/12/2023 3:17:00 PM

Good evening Victor. Do you know how beautiful are every word you write? The meaning of this poem really strikes my heart. So really full of magic envolved with your love expressing something that was lost or maybe lives in your heart forever. Enjoyed this magical poem full of love. Blessingsxxxx

Judy Ball

Date: 12/12/2023 1:37:00 AM

What a beautiful picture you paint her Victor. Love it. God Bless, JB

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/11/2023 9:45:00 AM

Very romantic and loving. For some reason I saw one of those Christmas Globes, a perfect village, mesmerized for the moment after its turning. Lovely writing. Thank you for sharing.

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/10/2023 5:59:00 AM

A beautifully whimsical portrait you have painted with your words Victor! So lovely to read this morning! Happy Sunday!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2023 11:11:00 AM

This is magically charming, Victor. Sorry to hear you've been ill. I hope you are well recovered.

Mike Bayles

Date: 12/9/2023 8:20:00 AM

Wonderful poem, Victor.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 12/8/2023 10:17:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your magical poem, Victor. You always captivate the reader and take them with you. I hope you are feeling as well as you can be. Thank you for your continued support; I appreciate it more than words. Look after yourself, Shirley

Valsa George

Date: 12/8/2023 7:35:00 PM

The magic is not over.... the magic continues night long ! Beautiful... ! Dear friend, I greatly appreciate your romantic mind at this age!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/8/2023 4:39:00 PM

Reading your poems Victor is like magic in itself, I've missed it :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/8/2023 3:16:00 PM

Fairies all about the couple’s romance!

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/8/2023 1:46:00 PM

Such a moving, expressive, and insightful work, it dwells marvelously in fantasy. I delighted in the fluidity of your enchanted lyric, Victor. You possess a linguistic ability that is at once tender and profound.

Joseph May

Date: 12/8/2023 10:57:00 AM

A magical night filled with melody and romance. Nicely penned

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/8/2023 10:48:00 AM

I love the fairies they are an enchanting addition to lovers of the night. I'd like to add this to my collection list of favorites, Victor. xo Anaya

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2023 10:13:00 AM

How ethereal and magical is your poetic storytelling. I love your use of fairies here and also the imagery you’ve painted of lovers, gives a beautiful and captivating ambience. Pleasure always reading your work

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2023 8:14:00 AM

- A perfect evening of romance and magic, Victor :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2023 8:12:00 AM

Great scene of the fairies and lovers. Always a good story teller my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/7/2023 8:39:00 PM

Magic is always magical in a poem. It is an uplifting poem that is good to read before going to sleep. It's so reassuring.

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/7/2023 12:54:00 PM

A truly enchanting read Victor. Beautifully wriiten with a great flow and rhyme. Love the imagery that draws you in- you can visualise the fairies flying around. A magical read. Blessings to you.