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Maccool's Tool

There once was a large man named MacCool
who was famed for his very fine tool
all the women they pled
to lay down in his bed
so he let them for he was no fool.




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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

June 17, 2014 at 9:21 AM

Congrats on your nice write and win, Debbie.

Poet Destroyer A

June 14, 2014 at 12:05 AM

Debbie, :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"

Paul Callus

June 11, 2014 at 3:37 PM

Love your humour, Debbie! Maybe the tool was a leg from a stool :) Congrats on your win. // paul

Sara Kendrick

June 9, 2014 at 6:02 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Debbie Guzzi

June 9, 2014 at 7:23 PM

Thanks so much Sara that means a lot to me

Elaine George

June 9, 2014 at 1:04 PM

lol!!!!! very funny Deb. still lol. Lainie

Shadow Hamilton

June 9, 2014 at 7:23 AM

bawdy and funny Debbie congrats on win hugs

Mohan Chutani

June 9, 2014 at 12:26 AM

Debbie, quite naughty and bawdy. Congrats on the win. Mohan

Richard Lamoureux

June 8, 2014 at 8:19 AM

The about this poem gave me another laugh. Congratulations, this was fun.

Skat A

June 8, 2014 at 7:31 AM

Debbie, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

June 8, 2014 at 5:05 AM

Wow the great humour wins Debbie ,, congrats !

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 7, 2014 at 9:45 PM

Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, debbie

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2014 at 9:39 PM

Way to GO with yours, Debs. Did you see Roy's suggestion for your poem over at his blog? I think it looks good either way. Congrats . This was one of my favorites for its humor.

Casarah Nance

June 7, 2014 at 7:13 PM

haha oh, I had to read this to my hubby, funny! i dig it, great job second place :)

James Fraser

May 19, 2014 at 3:52 PM

MacCoolio 'Limerick' Debbie, and I'm sure this quirky piece will go down well in the contest. I trust you are well? <*> James :)

Sara Kendrick

May 14, 2014 at 10:50 AM

Reads like a winner to me..It is questionable about his being a fool or not though..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Craig said ti was because I left a space between the stanzas that was only given HM..That was what he said..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

May 12, 2014 at 5:18 PM

Dear Deb, Please tell MacCool to stay away from me. I'm done with tools. LOL You'll do well in the contest with this, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Cyndi Macmillan

May 12, 2014 at 7:53 AM

Hee hee wicked. Large, eh? Hey... I just read a lovely rhyme by our Mystic Rose about camping...(I see it as a contemporary sonnet - you know me ;) ) It will make you smile and it has some sumptuous lines. Hugs, Dee

David Williams

May 9, 2014 at 4:40 AM

Debbie ha I like this, very good...David

Robert Pettit

May 9, 2014 at 1:15 AM

Do you remember a Saturday morning cartoon show called "Cool McCool"? Your write reminded me of that show. I haven't seen that for years. As always Debbie, you have a fine write here.