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It was a cold December night that the little girl set out, Tucked in her coat was her pure white cat called Snow; She carried a lantern to guide her way in the forest, It had been a month of snow and terrible ice storms. It should be a month of peace and love and Christmas, But there was no happiness for this girl and her family; Father had left early in the morning on an errand, And still he had not returned and it was so cold. The girl left her bed and the warmth of home to find him, And she had been walking all the frigid icy night; Oh she was so tired and she knew that she was quite lost, Maybe she could just stop awhile for a rest. Soon she fell asleep and was dreaming of December lights, It was the holiday season and gifts to be opened; For making snowmen and for ice skating and snowball fights, For walking in the fluffy pure white, pretty snow. December was a wonderful time of the year usually, But this year father was not working very much at all; And she heard mother and father talking about it, There would be no Christmas for the family this year. She did not feel father picking her and her cat up, He carried them home in his arms kissing their heads; He placed them by the fire and put warm blankets upon, The family prayed and prayed for their girl and her cat. She opened her eyes and it was December 25th, Snow was licking her face and father was smiling. ___________________________ October 24, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Lost in December Copyright Protected, ID 15-720-901-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, December, sponsor, Chase Trevi Sixth Place

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Date: 11/7/2015 4:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win, a marvelous mesh of picture and emotion
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:51:00 PM
I was so afraid but it turned to happiness when Father found his little girl. Congratulations, Constance. Love, joyce
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:55:00 PM
Joyce, thanks for the congrats, oh yes I had to end that happy for little girl, kitty and father and family ~
Date: 11/3/2015 1:12:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win broken with this amazingly beautiful write!
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:33:00 AM
Thank you Upma
Date: 11/2/2015 9:39:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your sweet December Win. SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2015 11:54:00 PM
Skat, thank you very much ~
Date: 11/2/2015 7:30:00 PM
Such a lovely December story, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your fine win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2015 11:54:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the congrats and the 7 ~
Date: 11/2/2015 6:31:00 PM
Congrats Broken Wings! Well deserved win :) -LU Be blessed
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Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2015 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Laura~
Date: 11/2/2015 1:48:00 PM
Many congrats Constance am so pleased this placed so highly for you - very well deserved:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2015 6:02:00 PM
Thank you Jan ~
Date: 10/25/2015 1:35:00 PM
The absolute best Christmas present a father could ever get. Excellent story, BW. Interesting subject and smooth read that kept my attention.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2015 3:36:00 PM
Thanks James for the nice comment and compliment ~
Date: 10/25/2015 10:44:00 AM
What a masterpiece! This is a winner in my book! Good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:38:00 PM
Elis, oh that is such a nice compliment ~
Date: 10/24/2015 7:05:00 PM
A sweet story with a happy ending. I really enjoyed it, BW, once I stopped staring at the picture. Innocence is beautiful.
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Date: 10/25/2015 4:17:00 AM
Thank you Lin for your kind comment, yes it is a lovely image ~~
Date: 10/24/2015 6:38:00 PM
That is one very beautiful poem my friend! Super 7 on that jewel...A7
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Date: 10/25/2015 4:18:00 AM
Robert, thanks so much for visiting my poem ~
Date: 10/24/2015 6:29:00 PM
what a beautiful poem Broken wings - loved it from start to finish had a lump in my throat by the end - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/25/2015 4:19:00 AM
Jan, thanks for your lovely comment ~

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