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Little Man Turns Three

Today’s my birthday. I just turned three.
I wished and wished with all my might
for something small and cute for me -
a polka-dot umbrella, red and white.

Mommy has one bigger, but this one
fits right in my hand. I couldn’t wait
for rain to come, so I prayed the sun
would go away! Then came something great!

It poured down rain. Mommy let me go
out in Grandpa’s field, but all alone!
No one had to watch me; Mom said so.
She said I could be all on my own.

To the red bench in the field I ran.
Under my umbrella I now stand.
Mommy says I’m a little man.
No one even has to take my hand.

I got up on this bench all by
myself! Even though I’m getting wet,
I still love my umbrella. The sky
is dark, but I will not go home yet.

Something really wonderful I see,
so a little longer here I’ll stay.
There’s another birthday gift for me -
a rainbow in the sky! What a day!

Written 9/29/17 for Eve Roper's  Red and White Polka Dot Umbrella contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 3:13 PM
I missed this one Andrea. It is so sweet. It is so difficult to keep up here with all the members. Congratulations on a well deserved First placement! : )
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 2:02 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Barden Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 12:37 AM
Andrea - Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - nicely done! :-) <3
Tor Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Congratulations Andrea on this first place win. Enjoyed this one. You can't help liking this little guy.
Haight Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:16 PM
So adorable, Andrea. Your little toddler came to life as he spoke to me! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:55 PM
Andrea, congratulation your top win with this delightful write !
May Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Congrats on your top win Andrea
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 5:23 PM
A very sweet poem this is! Congratulations for your top win! :)
Roper Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, I was looking to see poems with the child perspective and you captured it, thank you … Hugs Eve ~`*
Brian Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:20 PM
So real in my world...love it
Canerdy Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 8:45 AM
I absolutely LOVE this poem, Andrea! Janice
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your contest entry..I am sure that it is a great contender..Thanks for the time checking out my work..I appreciate you taking time to comment..Sara
May Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Wonderful write Andrea
Sergi Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 11:48 AM
a beautiful tale of a little boy and his umbrella. GOOD LUCK!
Konos Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Excellent!
Warrior Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 9:24 AM
A lovely version Andrea...enjoyed my friend...best of luck...this is going to be a toughy...^WW^
Mhangwa Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Lovely one here Andrea! All the best in the contest
Duet Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:44 AM
Oh Andrea! This is so precious. I just love it. A FAV for sure.
Wigley Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:31 AM
Lovely little write, Andrea, bounces like popcorn, full of innocence and joy. Will do well, I'm sure. Viv x
Jain Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:54 PM
First of all thank you very much for inspiring me and my poems. The poem you have written ise very nice as it is decorated with rhetorical devices, originality and your emotions. Few of the lines really touched me and I am going to read it once again after sometime so that I can understand them in a better way. Looking forward for your appreciation through reviews of my poems
Pandit Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 6:23 AM
You gave the boy a joy of his life on a rainy day--such a blessing it's his birthday--well crafted as always--best for a win Andrea!
White Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 3:52 AM
Love it Andrea. This picture invites to write cute poems :) Good luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 2:21 AM
aww so so cute Andrea i am sure Eve will love this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:35 AM
Hi Andrea, I agree with Victor, you made that "picture" come to life .Your top notch dialog brought your "readers" in the midst of scene. Everything thing was beautiful! It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Well done:-) Alexis
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