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Lilith, lithe and tall, with flawless porcelain complexion, long flaming red spun hair, and piercing emerald eyes, a sexually wanton woman. With cruelty in her eyes she dares, to stalk and steal babies in the drunken darkness, a demon creature of the night. She flies about serving the underworld, delivering night terrors to those who sleep. Like a screech owl, a fantasy to see a horror that falls upon men without warning. Lilith a dangerous demon of the night. 11/7/2017

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Lu Loo

Date: 1/9/2018 11:10:00 AM

creepy Eve! A demon is right! congrats sweet lady ;)-luloo

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/6/2018 7:19:00 PM

This is an eye-opener. Congrats on your well deserved win. Great write, Eve.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/6/2018 9:20:00 AM

Scary free verse Eve, congrats on placing in my contest!

John Michaels

Date: 11/25/2017 8:05:00 AM

Lovely spin on the theme, Eve! Great opening line and wonderful descriptions! Congrats on your win! Regards, John.

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/19/2017 1:07:00 AM

Ever since the one in the film 'Chitty Chitty Ban Bang' I've always found Baby snatchers the creepiest. Well done, Eve, a fine write.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/18/2017 4:44:00 AM

Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Eve ... blessings! :-)

Maria Williams

Date: 11/17/2017 6:07:00 PM

Congrats on your great win Eve, A masterpiece this poem...Maria

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/17/2017 4:34:00 PM

Scary for sure Eve. Congratulations for your win :)

Gary Smith

Date: 11/17/2017 3:27:00 PM

Great imagery Eve, congrats :)

Silent One

Date: 11/17/2017 1:39:00 PM

The first time I heard about Lillith was in a the vampire series called true blood.. I enjoyed your take on the contest... Congratulations on your first place in the contest

Tim Smith

Date: 11/8/2017 1:07:00 PM

Love this Eve...a fav

Judith S

Date: 11/8/2017 1:00:00 PM

Beautifully written Eve. Perhaps Lilith has close ties with Lucifer. Perfect name choice and an amazing write!! Best, Judy

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/8/2017 7:04:00 AM

Well, a scary woman with a lovely name, well written, Eve:)

Maria Williams

Date: 11/8/2017 6:43:00 AM

This is an amazing poem Eve. Is it for Silent Ones contest? A stalker with a difference this Lillith. You have poured such imagery to this. Good luck in the contest if it is an entry...Maria xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2017 6:07:00 AM

A stalker so well described--her image floats before my eyes--best for a win Eve!

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/8/2017 5:40:00 AM

Beware the Lilith of the night...she truly is despicable and horrific...great write my friend...god bless...^WW^

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2017 4:19:00 AM

This write scares me, I hate it when I hear of SIDS or other baby deaths...it saddens me to the core! This poem reminds me of that, like my friend who lost his baby to SIDS, it was so sad, we cried for a long time together! I surely loved this amazing write here my friend, so frightening to the center of my body, that makes for an awesome poem! You did an excellent job! Great Work!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/8/2017 12:05:00 AM

So well written eve, for some reason this reminded me of Lilith on the show Fraser!!! LOL