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Written for Ink Empress's Life is a Song poetry contest.

 

Life is a song

“When I am silent, I fall into the place where everything is music.”
Rumi

If life was a song, what would be your refrain? When instruments of fate performed in a ballad of somber sorrows, I floated like a ballet dancer in an eclectic fashion. My silent tongue had no melody, before love sowed harmonic tones, in a reverberating remedy of refreshing rhythms soothing a tortured soul. As my voice softened in a symphony of violin strings and saxophone vibratos, our bond composed a chorus of notes, like satin feathers from hummingbirds in soft clarinet choral chords, only heard in an orchestra of a velvet butterfly renaissance. You always have my songs on repeat, but I wonder if you will change the record? Together we write lyrics, sing verses as distant duets with drumbeat dynamics. Yet I am a metaphor of saffron rays lost in the absence of lilac moonlight. Everyday you disappear with dawn, as morning whispers her blessings. I'm left alone with birdsongs, who join in with my colourless chorus - echoing my angst of yearning to be free. I wonder if you will remain a twilight sonata. If you are the ebony to my ivory keys in this crescendo of bohemian dreams, why can't we be boundless as the sea? This vinyl veil we call existence is a composition of heartbeats with heartstrings woven into a vibrant bridge of emotions. Sadly no pedestal can reach lingering lullabies of the sky, so we continue to cast hues of golden heavenly harps, before final tenors are heard. If life was a song, our refrain would be an acoustic with steady beats, sometimes with too much bass to air - but we can control the volume. Tempo will always change  like a decrescendo, but we are the conductors  of our own musicality. Not all serenades sounds the same - no muse sings forever.
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Rose  Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:18 PM
why can't we be boundless as the sea? I believe we can be, if we safely swim the deep and beautiful ocean. Congrats S O:)
Poet Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 7:10 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-earned top contest win, Dear friend, SO.
Empress Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Dear silent one, well i am not surprised that this is actually the best poem for my contest, you have not just shared something lyrically captivating but also used poetic techniques in such a seamless manner in sheer eloquence whilst also delivering such moving emotions that would “ melt” any readers soul and heart, you do that so effortlessly as you express in a way that it flows like a soulful story! Worth reading more than just once! Congratulations on your win! This is also a fave for me
Iqbal Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:06 AM
"If you are the ebony to my ivory keys?" Uff I am just melting over this line.. "Together we write lyrics, sings verses as distant dues" a harmonious love that strives and plays a perfect melody.. such a beauuuutiful poem! Ink would sure love this entry!! Loved reading it brother!
Herrick Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Aww, the animals were blessed proud with your beautiful words and true analogy.. I loved the premise of this poem. The melody and the lyrics of a poet, channeling the harmonics and frequency of life's orchestrate instrumentality.
Baker Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Love the Rumi quote to set the stage for this beautifully written "Life is a song" entry, Silent One. I also enjoyed the You Tube recording. I feel the things you write about in this poem but haven't found the key to letting it out yet. It will happen when I'm ready. Your poetry resonates with my heart and soul. Thank you for blessing my life through your poetic gift. It's rare to read a poem of yours that doesn't go to my FAVs list, my friend. Love and Light, Bill
May Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 2:22 AM
Your poem captures life with all the Melodies it comes with, Great write Silent, a fave
Magdalinos Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 1:25 AM
Very beautiful work you have penned! Have a blessed day dear poet.
George Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 10:08 PM
Another masterpiece from you Silent one. "My silent tongue had no melody, before love sowed harmonic tones, in a reverberating remedy of refreshing rhythms soothing a tortured soul." Here I smell the fragrance of a true love budding and blossoming in your heart and you have begun to feel life as a song ! Happy for you.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 5:23 PM
A mind-full of magical musing and recent, exposé of a Green Thumb, and now in ceaseless-awe, you've got an ear for music. A combo being two of the three will welcome you to our home. Use of all three, we'll give you the key to the door. Sounds, beats, cres.., with butterfly renaissance, la creme de la creme. When the band stops playing and the music room goes silent --voila maestro. Aloha, William
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 2:26 PM
My silent tongue had no melody, before love sowed harmonic tones, in a reverberating remedy of refreshing rhythms soothing a tortured soul…my Dad played the clarinet so I loved the line: like satin feathers from hummingbirds in soft clarinet choral chords…a lovely write in silent perfection.
Messina Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 12:58 PM
If life were a song, I think mine would have to be "Dazed and Confused" (lol) Fantastic write, Silent One.
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:10 PM
Lol.. not a cowboy song?? You surprise my my friend.. mine is definitely, my way by Frankie boy.. Thanks
Edmonds  Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 12:47 PM
Loverly Silent One, if life were a song I’d sing all day long, a melody of my heart that’d reach number one in the charts. Blessings, Belle
Edmonds  Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 1:18 AM
My song would be - One Day at a Time by: Marilyn Sellars. Belle
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 12:50 PM
Would that be Petulia Clark or more Bette Davis? Or maybe Sabbath? Just kidding.. Thank you for your welcome.. I think a song by the Carpenters would be nice..
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Very descriptive work you have penned. It reads like this is a very deep love/relationship. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 12:50 PM
Thank you for your visit Sara..
Terry Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Happy New Year, Silent One. I am pleased that you started off 2024 with this beautiful poem. I miss the brilliance of your pen. I'm going to try my hand at a new poem for a new year. I haven't been very motivated thus far. Maybe I'll take a look at the contests for inspiration. Poetrysoup can feel so empty without the participation of those poets that I can relate to. Looking forward to more meaningful works from you.
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Hey Jan, so nice to see you back.. I really look forward to reading some new poems from your very talented pen.. Are there no poets on here that you can relate to? Maybe have a read of Ink Empress or Susan Ashley? There are so many more.. I hope 2024 is a productive one for you.
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 9:29 AM
You stuck gold again. Empress will adore this one
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Thanks Andrea.. She likes poems with metaphors and adjectives..
DiMino Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 8:23 AM
"our bond composed a chorus of notes, like satin feathers from hummingbirds in soft clarinet choral chords," -- "If you are the ebony to my ivory keys in this crescendo of bohemian dreams, why can't we be boundless as the sea?" -- Beautiful poetry, Si; really to be enjoyed and admired. Happy New Year my friend. May you continue excelling in your craft. Blessings.
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Hey Joe always great to get your feedback.. Thank you
Goldsmith Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 7:54 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Love your line, "but we are the conductors of our own musicality." So True... Good Luck... Looks like we both did this one. Have blessed day writing away............
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Paula, always appreciate your positive visits..
Pandit Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:56 AM
Your song echoes the melodies of life, my friend. Amazing how quickly your were able to weave this contest theme into a poem serenading love with splendor of emotions. No doubt a winner, as always, SO.
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Vijay... This one was written really quick.. had an idea and thought I would just go with the flow.. also music related poems are pretty easy for me.. written so many, as with flowers also
Poet Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:45 AM
Your poem is wonderful in many ways. It elegantly encapsulates the very nature of life as a song, SO. It offers a new perspective on an orchestra and its music. Your poetry is a work of art. The harmonizing tempo and rich emotion create a mesmerizing and one-of-a-kind musical experience. The user's ability to combine vivid images, profound ideas, descriptive language, and cunning references harmoniously converge to build a tapestry of dazzling aesthetics that flows gently with a lyrical cadence.
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:10 PM
Thank you for your wonderful support Sotto.
Sharma  Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Oh wow, dear Silent One, this is such a magnificent take for the contest..I'm loving the mellifluous flow throughout that shimmers with s unique musicality of emotions! Your words of descriptions, depth, imageries and metaphors truly knit a tapestry, exquisitely rich with a smooth poetic cadence..And I can see there is so much wisdom too, woven in these lines..hued with the feelings of love."satin feathers from hummingbirds in soft clarinet choral chords,only heard..velvet butterfly renaissance.
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:06 PM
Thanks Hiya, appreciate your in depth feedback.. This is a poem that just came to me..
Sharma  Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:25 AM
"If you are the ebony to my ivory keys in this crescendo of..can't we be boundless as the sea?" Ahh, those insights and expressions..just so evocative.. "continue to cast hues of golden heavenly harps,before final tenors are heard" Also, those ending stanzas are absolutely eloquent.. I truly enjoyed reading this one.. Best of luck for the contest too, it's definitely a top winner ~ :)
Shields Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Wonderful read. Have a great New Year. x
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:05 PM
Thaks Jane, happy new year..
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