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Languish

“Three, 300, or 3,000 - these are the number of unknown days, each far too little and yet too much at the same time, to see an irrevocably declined loved one languish and suffer, with that bittersweet release lingering in the doorway, but never quite being sent all the way in, to comfort and carry our loved one to that Better Place.”? Connie Kerbs Laughter – her sweet laughter – has gone away. As she leaves our space, I wonder why she sometimes gets this way. Nothing can we do for her then, unfortunately. Growing numb, she distances herself from family. Unrelenting for some days is she with apathy and gloom. In utter listlessness, she stays up in her room. Somehow she snaps out of it - though it may take a while. Happy we become again to see our dear teen daughter smile! March 15, 2023 For the Writing Challenge 'L' Words By Constance La France

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Date: 4/3/2023 3:09:00 PM
Andrea, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/19/2023 10:55:00 AM
Very touching experience to live through Is all I can think Andrea.' So tough.)
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Date: 3/17/2023 10:36:00 AM
It is hard being a teenager. Happy, then the slightest twitch can make spirits tumble. A very insightful poem, Andrea, and good luck. :) Congratulations!
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Date: 3/17/2023 7:31:00 AM
Life of a teen...so difficult. Congratulations on your win Andrea! :)
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Date: 3/17/2023 7:28:00 AM
A great acrostic in a very relevant theme. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/16/2023 7:13:00 PM
Teenage tantrums? You have brought out the angst here, Andrea, great acrostic:)
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Date: 3/16/2023 8:30:00 AM
Wow! The quote and poem capture the scene of despondency.
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Date: 3/16/2023 3:14:00 AM
Reads like someone needs to see a professional person in mental health. Good one about what parents face with teens, the one that spouts off at everyone is just as bad. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara
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Date: 3/16/2023 3:07:00 AM
Your acrostic is brilliant. Your entry for the contest is first class.
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Date: 3/16/2023 1:07:00 AM
so touching acrostiche, all my support, appreciated this "dramatic" penning indeed yann
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Date: 3/15/2023 11:20:00 PM
Teenage is a period of storm and stress. There are abrupt mood swings too ! After a period of gloom it is with relief, we see her smiling and happy once again. Great Acrostic...Andrea.
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Date: 3/15/2023 4:27:00 PM
at the younger i, i wuz smitten by an older woman...short story, she wuz by-polar overlapping with schizophrenia ....yesss, so you hit a soft spot uv mine dear poet...this write uv yourz should be called a Dramatic Acrostic ;) great write Andrea...much love, james
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