Knell

From the church tower, a sorrowful knell,
listen closely, a story it does tell.
Each reverberation, lands like a tear,
as the family of mourners gathers near.

For each year in a life, the knell does sound.
Twelve in all, such a short resound.
A soul too young, to hold such burden.
Forever to lie within the garden.

Each family member lays a rose upon,
the head stone, there in the early dawn.
A Mother lifts her face and listens,
the church bells knell, her daughters' been forgiven



Placement 4th
in Nikko's contest
Yay for K
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Nice job, Paula. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Fraser Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:10 AM
Many congratulations Paula on your fine win in Nikko's contest with this heartfelt poetry >> James
Neels Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 3:18 AM
A beautiful write Paula, congratulations to you on your win :) Wilma
Mannan Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Such a beautiful poem Paula. Many congratulations on this win.
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:36 PM
So lovely, Paula, how did I miss this one in your collection of poems? Congratulations to you!!
Wilson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Sad but beautiful ..congratulations on your win..take care~Deb
Roberts Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:43 AM
touching poetry, well deserving of its win in the contest
Freeman Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Beautiful job Paula with this worthy presentation for 4th place. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations Paula on thei worthy but sad poem and win. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:49 AM
This is so stunningly beautiful, Paula. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Paula
K. Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 6:54 AM
This poem honestly moved me, Paula-- such a sad yet also powerful poem you have here, I can almost hear those church bells... super congrats on your win! -- nikko :)
Gorelick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Id like to know the rest of this story..well done..and congrats on your bigwin. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Congrats Paula on your big win in Nikko's K contest with this excellent poem.. enjoyed each line with luv.. a creative piece my friend...
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 10:09 PM
touching entry, goos luck in the contest with this wonderful poem
Devonshire Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 8:29 PM
How sad for a child of 12 to be buried by her mother. Can't imagine the grief she must feel, but you describe the scene so well in your heartbreaking verse, Paula. Love, Carolyn
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