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Knell

From the church tower, a sorrowful knell, listen closely, a story it does tell. Each reverberation, lands like a tear, as the family of mourners gathers near. For each year in a life, the knell does sound. Twelve in all, such a short resound. A soul too young, to hold such burden. Forever to lie within the garden. Each family member lays a rose upon, the head stone, there in the early dawn. A Mother lifts her face and listens, the church bells knell, her daughters' been forgiven Placement 4th in Nikko's contest Yay for K

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Date: 10/20/2010 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:56:00 AM
Nice job, Paula. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 10/20/2010 6:10:00 AM
Many congratulations Paula on your fine win in Nikko's contest with this heartfelt poetry >> James
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Date: 10/20/2010 3:18:00 AM
A beautiful write Paula, congratulations to you on your win :) Wilma
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:23:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem Paula. Many congratulations on this win.
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:36:00 PM
So lovely, Paula, how did I miss this one in your collection of poems? Congratulations to you!!
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Date: 10/19/2010 12:00:00 PM
Sad but beautiful ..congratulations on your win..take care~Deb
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:43:00 AM
touching poetry, well deserving of its win in the contest
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful job Paula with this worthy presentation for 4th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on thei worthy but sad poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:49:00 AM
This is so stunningly beautiful, Paula. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Paula
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:54:00 AM
This poem honestly moved me, Paula-- such a sad yet also powerful poem you have here, I can almost hear those church bells... super congrats on your win! -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:53:00 AM
Id like to know the rest of this story..well done..and congrats on your bigwin. BG
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:56:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your big win in Nikko's K contest with this excellent poem.. enjoyed each line with luv.. a creative piece my friend...
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Date: 9/27/2010 10:09:00 PM
touching entry, goos luck in the contest with this wonderful poem
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:29:00 PM
How sad for a child of 12 to be buried by her mother. Can't imagine the grief she must feel, but you describe the scene so well in your heartbreaking verse, Paula. Love, Carolyn
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