Kite Escapade

Wind on harbor - on the wing,
a diamond, apple red,
darts and twirls beyond the string
I guide above my head.

Before a line unwound she flees.
Kite’s climb becomes a swoop.
A shift in rhythm of the breeze;
she makes a crazy loop.

I follow at a steady pace
beneath Kite’s streaming tail
as rising up, she starts to chase
A boat with billowed sail.

The sun behind her slides and casts
a crimson light. She glows!
She soars with gulls, pursuing masts,
But then abruptly slows!

Now wind blows cold, and bright bold Kite,
who fancied herself free,
forgot who held the string - and flight
curtailed - draws near to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cavanaugh Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Love this kite poem. Very well written. Bravo!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 9:43 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite and congratulations on your winning place xx
Richards Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 6:45 PM
I can picture the kite in the sky! Beautiful....and I love your choice of friends...Nikko is such a terrific sweetheart!
Maverick Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 3:06 PM
Great to see your well earned 1st place Andrea,, pleasure to read today..)
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Andrea, congrats on your win, a great pesonification poem, and a just tribute..David
Burch Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 9:25 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea!! and beautiful write! big hugs,love deb
Arno Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Congratulations Andrea :) Great write...Jon
May Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:18 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
Bauer Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:08 PM
andrea - this is such a delightful poem it is very deserving of your first place win. congratulations!
Song Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Oh wow! I had no idea on earth that u wrote this one, Andrea...gorgeous display of kite pageantry! Congrats...I love blind judging! Hope all its well with you. :) Gwendolen
Babcock Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:11 AM
We used to make kites with the boys and fly them in the field across the street which is a school yard. Used to be lots of fun. love phyl
Lee Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 2:44 AM
Thought I'd check out an older(?) poem of yours. Loved the imagery, thanks for leaving such kind comments all the time! :)
Brown Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Andrea, this reminds me of childhood days when I could still fly a kite. Great write with so much said and pictured in such few words. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Fraser Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:38 AM
A delightful display are given by many a kite Andrea. Lovely poem if I may say so, many congratulations on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James
Neels Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 3:33 AM
Andrea congratulations on your win with this colorful write, love Wilma
Mannan Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:31 PM
A lovely poem Andrea. I love kite flying too. In india we celebrate the kite festival in January.
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Very nice Andrea. A unique approach to the contest. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Wilson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Oh I love this Andrea! congratulations on your win!take care~Deb
Roberts Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:51 AM
love it, beautiful flow to this piece, many congrats on your win in the contest
Freeman Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations Andrea with your Personification for a well deserved win in the top 10. Agape, Moses
Gorelick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Ive treid and tried to write about kites..Im going to quit now..this is just to awesome. Congrats on your high flying win. BG
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Well done, Andrea! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:26 AM
You and lucky number 5! I really enjoyed flying this kite in my mind's eye, Andrea--very vividly told indeed! I tell you I can feel that breeze over here (and nope it's not because of the typhoon) Enjoyed how you compared your kite to a sailboat as well, very cool -- :) Congrats to you, sweetie :) hugs nikko :)
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