Kiss

A young child's first kiss will be with a puppy or a kitten, as she gets older the kiss could be written. A boy puts the first kiss on her cheek and then will run, this will not be her last one. Her dad may say come here son watch out about having so much fun. Date Written: 3/10/2023 "4 Place"

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 3:44:00 PM

Paula, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2023 7:47:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my young child's first "Kiss" write. We always remember our first kiss. Thanks for a cute contest with the "K" word. This is an honor. Have a great day writing away...........

Marikate Kingston

Date: 3/29/2023 3:53:00 PM

Oh that first kiss. SMOOCH! I'll never forget mine :) Congratulations on your win!! Hooray!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2023 10:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Kiss" write. Yes, we will always remember out first kiss. Have a great day writing away...........

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/15/2023 2:09:00 PM

that's a really cute one. Thanks for the laugh and congratulations.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/16/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. I am glad I could give you a laugh. Have a great day writing away...........

Joseph May

Date: 3/15/2023 10:34:00 AM

Lovely verse Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/16/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this "Kiss" write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day writing away...........

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 3/14/2023 10:45:00 AM

Sweet and beautiful!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 3:12:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun kids "Kiss" write. It was fun to bring to life. Have a great day writing away...........

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/14/2023 8:10:00 AM

So sweet. Congratulations on your win, Paula. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 8:34:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this "Kiss" write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day writing away...........

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 3/14/2023 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win , Dear Paula Wonderful poem, Well done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 8:33:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my kids fun "Kiss" write. Have a great day writing away...........

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/14/2023 6:12:00 AM

This is sweet Paula. Congratulations :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 8:32:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found this kids "Kiss" to be sweet. Have a great day writing away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2023 3:19:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 8:31:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Great to see you back again. Thanks... Young kids are so cute when learning to Kiss. Hugs. Have a great day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2023 3:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Creative work for sure. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 8:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my "Kiss" write to be creative. Have a great day writing away...........

Anil Deo

Date: 3/13/2023 7:51:00 PM

Congrats on being placed in the cintest. Your poems showcase innocence, Love, wisdom, growth. Thx, shalom shalom dear Sis

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 8:27:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my kids fun "Kiss" write. Have a great day writing away...........

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/13/2023 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Paula. What a beautiful and lovely poem. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/14/2023 8:25:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Kiss" write. Have a great day writing away...........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/13/2023 1:40:00 AM

Cute poem. The young kiss sincerely.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/13/2023 12:21:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my cute/fun Kiss write. Young kids can be so cute with their Kisses. Have a great day writing away...........

Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2023 11:23:00 PM

The effect and nature of kiss can vary depending on from whom it is received and to whom it is given. Well portrayed. All the best dear Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/13/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for you best. Glad you enjoyed this Kiss write. Have a great day writing away...........

Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 3/12/2023 9:14:00 PM

One can only propose or surmise Wisdom brought by grandmother's eyes This was very sweet and endearing Paula, I enjoyed the memory of my daughters first willingly given kiss to our cats that was envoked as I read it! A.S.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/13/2023 12:16:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my Kiss write as you remembered your daughters. Young kids love to Kiss their pets. Have a great day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/12/2023 12:08:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading this fun Kiss write. Have a great weekend writing away...........

Paul Callus

Date: 3/12/2023 11:44:00 AM

That first innocent kiss (even if only to a pet) would be the first step leading to future fun and romance, Paula. ~ I enjoyed your cute poem, my friend. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 12:16:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my cute Kiss write. It was fun to write. Have a great day writing away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2023 8:32:00 AM

- A gentle little kiss ... so sweet - Best wishes in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 10:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes. Glad you like my Kiss write. Hugs... Have a great weekend writing away...........

James Peranteau

Date: 3/12/2023 1:17:00 AM

this write explains the rashes on my face during my son's early days...i am allergic to cats!...enjoyed this write...much luv, james

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 9:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun Kiss write. Being allergic to cats will do a rash. So sorry. Have a great weekend writing away...........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/11/2023 6:31:00 PM

Never thought of that, i.e, a first kiss with a kitten. Nice! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 9:56:00 AM

Thanks for your note. That first kiss will be from a puppy or a kitten. A lick/kiss. So glad you like this one. Have a great weekend writing away...........

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/11/2023 12:18:00 PM

Hello Paula, this is a cute poem it made me smile. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2023 11:41:00 AM

Hello Paula, you are welcome. It is a cute poem. Hugs. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2023 9:53:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my cute Kiss write. I love to give out smiles. So glad this Kiss gave you one. Hugs... Have a great weekend writing away...........

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/11/2023 6:20:00 AM

So sweet, Paula. I can tell you how much true that is - "and then will run,"! Appreciate your reading my humble poems,Paula! I was away for a while, and there is a bit of health issues in the family. I wish I wrote more! Love, Dear Friend, and warm wishes ~ Mala

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/10/2023 6:54:00 PM

So cute and all so true Paula. A stunning way to describe a kiss. Love it

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2023 6:08:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this Kiss write. Thanks. That made my day. Have a great weekend writing away...........