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Fast Toss the knotted rope Thrust the knife Standing still I wait Kill the pain Leave the burdens at heavens gate In anxiety I saturate Standing still I wait Rain Falling from hell Washing me in bloody tales Standing still I wait Drowning As I drink old mans ale Tranquility killed Stranding still I wait Beginning The road to dust Horror seems to be a must Standing still I wait Ending Agony dances on my head Angels running from me Standing still I wait Black Both blood and the night Rotting to nothing Still I wait no more

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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 11/8/2017 8:51:00 AM

Wow!! I Felt That One, Really Good Writing Arthur.

Jean Murray

Date: 10/31/2017 7:07:00 PM

"They also serve, those who stand and wait." Just as you loved my WAITER, I love this Arthur.

Sara Ella

Date: 10/30/2017 8:24:00 PM

Art, this is haunting - both picture and poem :) I hope it is for Halloween <3

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/30/2017 8:12:00 PM

Hi Authur, I agree with them below, you have penned a well written dark piece. It works well with the Halloween season . Today is Halloween eve- Alexis

Tim Smith

Date: 10/30/2017 9:14:00 AM

Remove the darkness and the pain will slip away...sing a happy song

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2017 7:44:00 AM

Gee Arthur this really is dark and deep and that photo is absolutely awesome!:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 10/30/2017 7:32:00 AM

A very dark write, well written Arthur

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/30/2017 5:58:00 AM

Wow, this is a wondrously dark and a perfect Halloween write! I know you could be writing this not for a Halloween topic, but it is wonderful for this time of the year! You have impressed me beyond any scope with this delightfully spooky poem, What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/30/2017 12:13:00 AM

Suitably Gothic for the time of year, Arthur, nicely penned. Regards, Viv

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/29/2017 10:11:00 PM

You're really in a Hallowe'en mood!

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/29/2017 9:55:00 PM

Thx for using pic. Dark poem my friend ideal for Halloween time.....Seren