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For Constance La France journal, jagged, junk contest

The visionary art of Willow arlenea - Beloveds

Yes, that is the role of the Teacher, as Shams was to me – showing one ‘who they are’, so they can stop bleating, crying at night, and never again be afraid. Rumi
Oh beloved, I'm like Rumi without Shams. A shivering summer soul, secretly stalked by wild white winter wolves. A chiffon child chiselling chimerical calligraphy, cursed with invisible ink, silent in sentimental sighs. I've become the son of solitude, tired from torture and torment, descending like surreal sinking sunsets shaded in scarlet, yearning for a dawn where we can blend like sunrise. I have no desire to write in your journal of sorrows,  but you cut my veins to bleed. What is pain without pleasure, or a poet without his poetess? Oh mistress of the night, I'll forever wait for you to adorn my garden, to finally inhale the fragrance of my roses. I'm the oil lamp in all your blackness. Sometimes I may flicker like a candle, but I will always reignite to create a spark. Change the eternal chambers of my heart. The day you stop reading my musings, my pen will forever slumber. Oh daughter of darkness, let me salvage moonlight then place it into your eyes. Guide my quill to engrave upon your shores. Together we will sail away from Satan's spawn. I'll shield you from twilight's beasts, protect you from demons with crimson claws, emancipate your wings to fly from an illusionary island. Because, you love the moon, but it's the stars you gaze at, hoping their stardust will illuminate your heart, before they fade into nothingness. Oh my seclusive sweetheart, I will strum strings of serenity, so you release tears of tranquillity. I may not be the most handsome blossom, nor the most popular prolific poet, but I gift you my art and alliteration. Some may say I'm romantic, but I am no judge of what is exotic or poetic. We can't put all our faith in petals and poetry. I'm no emperor who deserves an enchanting empress - merely a broken butterfly in your precious palms. Life is an absent bride, so I'm not afraid to bleed to death, in the hope of soothing tomorrows.

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Date: 10/27/2023 7:47:00 AM
Silent, wow, your poem is amazing, so wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
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Date: 10/23/2023 5:15:00 PM
A beautiful love poem! It showed your beating heart!
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Date: 10/23/2023 11:20:00 AM
Alliteration at it's finest on full display. Congrats SO on another brilliant write worthy of potd!
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Date: 10/23/2023 6:29:00 AM
Back with belated congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, my friend.
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Date: 10/22/2023 7:10:00 PM
Dear Silent One, continue to be a constant light in the shadows. Because you bloom in such a tender, yet poetic way, you are a delight to the eyes. Your words hold meaning, emotion and tender moments. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/22/2023 6:58:00 PM
Lovely lovely Silent One! Have a nice day ~AA
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Date: 10/22/2023 4:00:00 PM
Quite beauteous and haunting, Silent One. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/22/2023 2:48:00 PM
A beautiful masterpiece, Silent One! Warmest congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 10/22/2023 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, S.O.
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Date: 10/22/2023 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, beautiful gift you have in writing to express so poetically
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Date: 10/22/2023 10:19:00 AM
Of course this is POTD!! An alliteration masterclass. A desired one never better woo'd. :o)
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Date: 10/22/2023 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD S.O…..Debx
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Date: 10/22/2023 10:14:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your poem, "Journal", being selected for the honor of POTD, Silent One. Well deserve honor, my friend. Poetry at its best! Bill
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Date: 10/22/2023 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! It is mesmerizing! The alliteration you can go through with a fine tooth comb. I love alliteration. Thank you!
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Date: 10/22/2023 8:47:00 AM
Huge Congratulations, Dear SO! "merely a broken butterfly in your precious palms." - wow! what a line! "Life is an absent bride, so I'm not afraid to bleed to death," - and what an ending! I feel inspired to write another poem on the same theme! Free verse is so liberating! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 10/22/2023 8:39:00 AM
Dear SO - wow! Many congratulations on this truly worthy POTD. You astound us all with your poetic genius. Reading this masterpiece renders one almost speechless. There’s so much to admire here that one doesn’t know where to start. I instantly noticed the abundance of those amazing alliterations. Like Maria, the line,’ I’m the oil lamp in all your blackness ‘ really stood out for me (amongst others)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 10/22/2023 8:44:00 AM
I’m smiling to myself because when I read a masterpiece like this it makes me fully aware of just how humble my own musings are :) but I’m learning (slowly) from great writers like yourself and all thanks to supportive, talented poets like yourself and so many others here, I feel I have already improved. Thank you SO and congratulations! :):)
Date: 10/22/2023 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely story/write. I love your line "The day you stop reading my musings, my pen will forever slumber." Words from a true writer. Have a wonderful day with your wonderful win.
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Date: 10/22/2023 8:03:00 AM
I fell into the soft musings of of this truly romantic write. Congratulations! :)
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 10/22/2023 7:59:00 AM
Love this romantic and dramatic piece, everything that poetry should be , Silent One. All of it is brilliant. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy
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I Am Anaya
Date: 10/22/2023 8:14:00 AM
The painting is stunning.
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Anaya
Date: 10/22/2023 7:58:00 AM
Silent One, the depths of emotion, sought and achieved by your pen, are astounding! Congratulations on your POTD honors !!
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Mike
Date: 10/22/2023 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Silent.
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Victor
Date: 10/22/2023 6:33:00 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on POTD Silent
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Jo
Date: 10/22/2023 5:56:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, my friend. Glad to see you in this space. Much poetic prowess on display. Enjoy your special day today, SO.
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Vijay
Date: 10/22/2023 3:43:00 AM
back to congratulate you on a well deserved POTD. This poem was a masterpiece of emotions so well crafted that I'm still in awe! Congrats, Sara
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Sara
Date: 10/22/2023 3:40:00 AM
This magical poem encourages enlightenment. Well done and congrats on a perfect potd.
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Silent One
Date: 10/22/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Karen..
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