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Jaded Since You

Jonquils blooming gracefully where we kissed our last goodbye. Their beauty I hardly see and I cannot even cry. March 2017

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Date: 4/16/2017 1:26:00 PM
awww, sad but lovely - glad i know this is only fictional, my friend. interesting form
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Date: 4/10/2017 10:03:00 PM
che sara' sara', what ever will be will be. It's a blessing in disguise when the heart forget's.
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Date: 4/3/2017 3:51:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your podium finish, Andrea. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:26:00 PM
An excellent jueju, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 4/3/2017 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. Numbness is truly jaded and bad place to be. Good to see jaded used differently, very nice write.
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Date: 4/2/2017 9:47:00 PM
AAhhh, sad but sweet Andrea. A lovely write.
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Date: 4/2/2017 4:33:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju it really touched my heart
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Date: 3/29/2017 10:34:00 AM
Emotionally beautiful, Andrea. You capture the painful sadness of your jaded heart. // paul
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Date: 3/29/2017 8:07:00 AM
Very effective in such a short piece.
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Date: 3/28/2017 10:20:00 PM
I've felt Jaded after my last love. Very powerful poem Andrea, good luck in the contest ! :)
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Date: 3/28/2017 9:16:00 PM
Great! True - beauty loses meaning when one becomes jaded
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Date: 3/28/2017 8:33:00 PM
I like this poem. You know the poem - I forget the poet - "Poems are mad by fools like me - but only God can make a tree". However I have read Freud's "The future of an Illuion" Well I am going to celebrate Passover like I always do. Also, when I find something I thought was lost I think "There is a God" - hope I'm right. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/29/2017 8:06:00 AM
You are right.
Date: 3/28/2017 1:42:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Andrea! And best of luck to you in the contest.
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Date: 3/28/2017 1:22:00 AM
To pen sorrow to feel beautiful is wonderful art and incredible talent. Gorgeous writing. a fave, 7+ many blessings to you :-) xx
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Date: 3/28/2017 12:43:00 AM
Beautifully done Andrea...You have delivered so much of emotions in very few lines... Great one for the contest Andrea... Loved it ...A big 7...
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Date: 3/27/2017 10:34:00 PM
Nice Jueju Andrea..
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Date: 3/27/2017 5:59:00 PM
So consistent is your lovely writing.
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Date: 3/27/2017 4:27:00 PM
very poignant, andrea!
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Date: 3/27/2017 3:52:00 PM
beautiful but sad Andrea - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/27/2017 3:43:00 PM
the fact you can not cry dear poet says it all..good luck my friend
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Date: 3/27/2017 3:37:00 PM
So sadly well done Andrea...
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Date: 3/27/2017 3:37:00 PM
An abundance of emotion fills this short piece...very well done Andrea
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