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Jaded Since You

Jonquils blooming gracefully

where we kissed our last goodbye.

Their beauty I hardly see

and I cannot even cry.


March 2017

lost lovejueju

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Jack Horne

April 16, 2017 at 1:26 PM

awww, sad but lovely - glad i know this is only fictional, my friend. interesting form

Robert Johnson

April 10, 2017 at 10:03 PM

che sara' sara', what ever will be will be. It's a blessing in disguise when the heart forget's.

Paul Callus

April 3, 2017 at 3:51 PM

Back to congratulate you on your podium finish, Andrea. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Merryman

April 3, 2017 at 12:26 PM

An excellent jueju, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

John Beam

April 3, 2017 at 6:53 AM

Congratulations, Andrea. Numbness is truly jaded and bad place to be. Good to see jaded used differently, very nice write.

James Inman

April 2, 2017 at 9:47 PM

AAhhh, sad but sweet Andrea. A lovely write.

Constance La France

April 2, 2017 at 4:33 PM

Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju it really touched my heart

Paul Callus

March 29, 2017 at 10:34 AM

Emotionally beautiful, Andrea. You capture the painful sadness of your jaded heart. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

March 29, 2017 at 8:07 AM

Very effective in such a short piece.

Bruce Adams

March 28, 2017 at 10:20 PM

I've felt Jaded after my last love. Very powerful poem Andrea, good luck in the contest ! :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 28, 2017 at 9:16 PM

Great! True - beauty loses meaning when one becomes jaded

Matthew Anish

March 28, 2017 at 8:33 PM

I like this poem. You know the poem - I forget the poet - "Poems are mad by fools like me - but only God can make a tree". However I have read Freud's "The future of an Illuion" Well I am going to celebrate Passover like I always do. Also, when I find something I thought was lost I think "There is a God" - hope I'm right. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux

March 29, 2017 at 8:06 AM

You are right.