It's Quiet Now

It is quiet now 
 -the sun moves up the ridge 

Honey crisp scent of freedom 
 -hovers and engulfs the air 

Pangs of pleasure peal 
 -the primrose bows her head 

Yellow paints the morning 
 -the fields are all aglow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/7/2017 2:58:00 PM
Ahhh.. To drink in such a morning!.. Beautiful, my friend..
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Date: 9/1/2017 12:55:00 PM
Such a nice serene poetic landscape you painted with your well chosen words. Congrats on Potd.
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Date: 9/1/2017 7:42:00 AM
I loved this Tim. So descriptive. Tfs!
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Date: 8/22/2017 11:24:00 AM
A belated Congratulations on your POTD Tim. It is well deserved for this wonderful write. Your pen shall ever run gold. Your words shine my friend, an excellent piece of poetry. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 8/21/2017 9:00:00 PM
Just came back to say Congrats on POTD, well deserved!
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:46:00 PM
A great example of a perfect choice for poem of the day! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:45:00 PM
Not only are you a brilliant writer but you are also just a great all around person. I love your wit, quick and funnier than even ME. (Of course I am not referring to this romantic poem.) I just wanted to take the time to tell you how much I respect and appreciate you. I miss you. Unfortunately my day to day life has been complex of late. You have been nothing but a great friend to me. This is a fav for me. Always armand.
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:00:00 PM
This is lovely Tim. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! : )
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Date: 8/21/2017 5:44:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, Tim. Lovely description.
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Date: 8/21/2017 3:23:00 PM
Hi Tim, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/21/2017 3:09:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD :D
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Date: 8/21/2017 1:33:00 PM
Really an amazing use of words and expressions...Mr.Tim. congratulations for POTD.
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Date: 8/21/2017 12:24:00 PM
Coming back to read this again and Congratulating you on your POTD, Tim :)
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Date: 8/21/2017 11:38:00 AM
How appropriate for me! My company just left and I was thinking about the delicious quiet. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/21/2017 10:57:00 AM
Nicely done, congratulations on poem of the day
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Date: 8/21/2017 9:10:00 AM
Ahhhhhh....serenity reigns. Lovely poem, Tim. Congrats on POTD.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Eileen.
Date: 8/21/2017 8:56:00 AM
Really pretty Tim. Congratulations on POTD.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Dean
Date: 8/21/2017 8:04:00 AM
Lovely perk to my morning this is Tim. Congrats on potd :) xomo
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Date: 8/21/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thanks so much Mo. :)
Date: 8/21/2017 7:23:00 AM
Congrats!!! Tim on POTD!!!...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/21/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thanks WW. I have a bunch of warrior t-shirts from the kids school. I can send you one.
Date: 8/21/2017 6:34:00 AM
Many congrats on POTD Tim - let's hope this one is here to stay!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 9:43:00 AM
I'm not removing it and I don't sweat a banned entity.
Date: 8/21/2017 5:48:00 AM
Returning to say Congrats, Tim!
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Date: 8/21/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks again Vijay
Date: 8/21/2017 5:46:00 AM
Congrats Tim. It is worthy of being POTD...Seren
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 9:41:00 AM
Thanks quaddle ....or is it waddle
Date: 8/21/2017 5:27:00 AM
Quiet moment revisited. You paint such romantic poetry, Tim. I'm smiling over it's being chosen as potd.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thanks Lin. The mornings give me a special feeling and I tried to share it with the readers.
Date: 8/21/2017 5:05:00 AM
So beautiful my friend, grats on PotD :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thanks my friend
Date: 8/21/2017 4:49:00 AM
Nice work! Congrats!
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Kudzai...I will pop over to your page shortly
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