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It Was One of Those Mornings -Contest

My alarm let out quite a sound From out of my bed I did bound I fell on my rump Took quite a bump And let out a yelp like a hound. My wife came running to see Just what the trouble could be Took one look at my rump Gave a kiss to my bump Do you know one as lucky as me?

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/18/2017 9:24:00 AM

Sweet humor, Charlie. This poem put a huge smile on me face. Excellent and funny limerick. Love always.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/18/2017 12:15:00 PM

Just a silly little contest, just for fun, thanks Freddie...

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2016 8:56:00 PM

Love the humor, Charlie, congratulations on your win!!!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/25/2016 9:38:00 PM

This I pad is giving me fits tonight. Sorry Eve, thanks for your nice note, I appreciate the effort, thanks, Charlie

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/25/2016 9:27:00 PM

Thank you. Silent One

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2016 5:59:00 AM

Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/25/2016 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Sara, I so appreciate your note and encouragement...Charlie