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When the wind blows hard, sometimes it takes possessions from you, but all of a sudden It stops and everything can be replaced. When the sun burns for longtime, the drought ruins your crops, it takes part of you, but all of a sudden it rains and everything can be harvested again. When you walked towards me, you got deep into to my heart. You made many promises, you became my everything, and all of a sudden you left, maybe my heart will heal, but there will always be a scar. Sometimes the snow falls when the trees are blooming and the birds have already made their nests. The flowers will wither before their time and the birds, confused, will cry. The things you do everyday, the small amount of stones you put in a wall, it will make big changes for tomorrow. Your behaviour towards others, your words of compassion, your loyalty, your empathy, your kindness and the warmth that you give without asking for anything in return, will drive away any anger that you may feel, and will strengthen your feelings and your soul. Your religion is nothing but the way you act. Your temple is nothing but your own body. You will find your peace when your mind, your heart and the path you walk are in tune.

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Date: 4/23/2024 4:48:00 AM
Belated POTD Congratulations Maria for your beautiful wise poem stating the true importance of being at peace and in tune with ones self…..just lovely! Debx
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/23/2024 5:43:00 AM
Thank you very much Deb. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a blessed day!
Date: 4/21/2024 10:50:00 AM
Hello Maria, enjoy your special day of POTD. Broken things can be replaced by the wind. Be kind to others. they will be kind to you. enjoy your special day Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2024 10:36:00 AM
Hello Marika, I will and you have a nice week to. Hugs. /Darlene/ Love, /Darlene/
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/22/2024 12:48:00 AM
My dear Darlene. Thank you so much. I appreciate your comment. Have a nice week. Love/María
Date: 4/6/2024 11:12:00 AM
It slipped my mind that I had read and commented on this poetry. I apologize. Such a lovely and persuasive statement of the deepest truth. When our thoughts, feelings, and actions are all in harmony, we reach a state of complete tranquility, as stated in the last paragraph. You should be proud of yourself for winning POTD; your poetry is just outstanding. Congrats
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/6/2024 11:50:00 AM
My dear Sotto, don't apologize. I'm always happy to have your wisdom commenting anything you like or not from my poems, because for me you are a golden medal poet. I appreciate your lovely comment. Have a nice weekend my friend!
Date: 4/5/2024 2:09:00 AM
- "The things you do everyday, the small amount of stones you put in a wall, it will make big changes for tomorrow" words of wisdom, Maria - A beautiful poem with a lot of emotion - (Sorry I wasn't at soup yesterday, but glad I found it today :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Well deserved, my friend :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/5/2024 2:40:00 AM
Good morning Anne. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm very happy to hear from you. Have a great day. Hugsxxx
Date: 4/5/2024 12:26:00 AM
This Poem reminds me how an individual should be vigilant in guarding themselves and hearts for those that use their charm to deceive, get what they want, and leave. They are wolves in sheep's clothing devouring as many as they can. Never compromise what is right, and follow Gods protection in his commandments and those that do will be protected from the Wolves. Congratulations for receiving POTD...
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/5/2024 12:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for leaving your nice comment Michael.
Date: 4/4/2024 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD and God bless you, love, Gina
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/5/2024 12:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Regina. God bless you too. Have a nice day!
Date: 4/4/2024 6:25:00 PM
True: Things can be replaced when damaged by the wind and sun, and memories remain, when a heart has been broken. Your character reveals so much about who you are. Always be kind, caring and compassionate. Your thoughts are beautiful in every way. Congratulations Maria, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/5/2024 12:43:00 AM
Good morning Brandy. Thank you so much for stopping by leaving your kind words. Have a great day!
Date: 4/4/2024 3:37:00 PM
Dear Maria, the most profound truth is stated so beautifully, and convincingly. The ending line is the ultimate truth - we achieve peace, when heart and mind, and the path are in tune! Congratulations on your POTD honour, this is a brilliant poem!
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Date: 4/4/2024 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by and your warm comment. Have a nice eveningxxx
Date: 4/4/2024 12:43:00 PM
a simple fact so beautifully stated Maria...for there is a time to every season.
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Date: 4/4/2024 12:51:00 PM
Thank very much for your nice words John. Have a blessed day!
Date: 4/4/2024 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations Maria on your eloquent and heartfelt PODT. It is a wonderful free verse piece with wave after wave of wisdom washing before me. Best -Ken
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 11:44:00 AM
Hello Ken. Thank you for stopping by, leaving such a kind comment. Have a lovely evening. María
Date: 4/4/2024 10:16:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 11:43:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph. I appreciate it. Blessings!
Date: 4/4/2024 9:24:00 AM
I'm breathless dear Maria. I love this write! Your last two lines are spot on and bring a level of reality to "real" life. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 10:15:00 AM
Good afternoon Linda. Thank you so much for your lovely and encourageous message. Happy you enjoyed. Have a nice afternoon!
Date: 4/4/2024 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine POTD, Maria! It is a beautiful poem with much wisdom within, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your lovely poetry. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 10:12:00 AM
Hello my friend. Thank you for all your kind and warm words. I really appreciate it, as I also love to talk with you and Sara. Such a wonderful couple you both. Have a blessed dayxxxx
Date: 4/4/2024 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "In Tune" write. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 8:28:00 AM
Good afternoon Paula. Thank you very much for your kind words. Blessings!
Date: 4/4/2024 6:08:00 AM
This is honestly one of the best poems I've read in some time. The way you use the natural elements to describe the ebb and flow of life, the dark and the light. Then, your succinct and truthful summary at the end, ie, our religion is what we practice, not what we believe. So good and so worthy of top honors. A fave for me Maria
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 6:15:00 AM
Dear Tom. I really appreciate your lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much and also for the Fav. Have a great day. Blessings!
Date: 4/4/2024 4:29:00 AM
Dear Maria, I loved how your poem is a wonderful reflection on life's ebb and flow, capturing the essence of resilience and the cyclical nature of existence. Your words, take us of the transient nature of both joy and sorrow. Such insightful and thought-provoking verses. Congratulations on being recognized as the Poet of the Day - a well-deserved honor for your beautiful work. Blessings, Daniel
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 5:44:00 AM
Dear Daniel, thank you so much for passing by, reading and leaving such a lovely and deep comment. Hoping you have a wonderful day. Blessings
Date: 4/4/2024 3:54:00 AM
heartfelt congratulations on your POTD designation--a beautiful poem from a beautiful person.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 5:41:00 AM
My dear friend Sara. Once again, thank you very much for always stay beside me. Hope you have a beautiful day. Love/Maríaxxxx
Date: 4/4/2024 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Maria
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 5:39:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear Victor. Have a great dayxxx
Date: 4/4/2024 2:58:00 AM
Beautiful poem from a loving soul and wise mind. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Maria
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 5:38:00 AM
Good afternoon Unseeking. Thanks a lot for your kind and warm words. Blessings
Date: 4/4/2024 2:10:00 AM
Dearest Maria, so happy to see your name here dear friend with your beautiful poem for POTD. It’s such a lovely, delightful and uplifting read. I loved it! You have captured so much and it really makes you reflect upon things. Such a thoughtful write and inspiring too. I especially loved the last two lines. How true! So enjoyed reading it and glad you are back posting your wonderful poetry for all to enjoy. Have a wonderful, celebratory day dear one. You deserve it. Luv, big hugs and smiles xx
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 5:36:00 AM
My dear Christina. What is really uplifting is your always kind messages. You bring a fresh breaze to me all the time. Glad you liked it. Thank you so much my friend. I hope you have a wonderful day. Love/María
Date: 4/4/2024 1:55:00 AM
Wonderful Marie, your words touched my heart. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 2:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind comment Beryl.
Date: 4/4/2024 12:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your potd honor for a fabulous emotive poem!
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 2:02:00 AM
Thanks a lot Karen for your comment.
Date: 4/4/2024 12:38:00 AM
It's something we should all do, keeping everything in tune, it's only when things are out of sync that things start to go awry. Congratulations Maria on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/4/2024 2:01:00 AM
You are right.Thank you so much Tom.
Date: 4/3/2024 6:05:00 AM
Just a lovely poem with a beautiful message at the end...a message of balance and peace within. I especially liked: our behaviour towards others, your words of compassion, your loyalty, your empathy, your kindness and the warmth that you give without asking for anything in return, will drive away any anger that you may feel, and will strengthen your feelings and your soul. I agree...precious and priceless words. Delighted to read one of your poems again. Hope you've been okay, hugs, Sara
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/3/2024 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara. Yes, I'm ok, just we had a few troubles, but everything is ok. Thanks a lot. I hope you and Bill are doing well. Have a nice afternoonxxx
Date: 4/2/2024 4:01:00 PM
Hello Maria, My fav. Maria. I hope you had a nice Easter. We will talk soon. Love, Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/3/2024 2:55:00 PM
Hello Maria, You are welcome. yes we will talk soon. Your friend, /Darlene/ Hugs.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 4/2/2024 4:09:00 PM
Hey my dear. I will contact you soon. Thank you my dear Darlene Love/maría
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