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my thoughts lets go of a thousand things yet, I can easily recall every detail on the day of your funeral . . . oh, it was a slow drive down a winding long road following that black hearse . . . then, in the snow I was walking, mindless as the wind blows back my hair and snowflakes pause in the trees still cascading from tangled branches falling like weeping tears down, down, down and branches moan and groan oh, I am lost in this forever grief . . . and pristine snow drifts in the cemetery where a headstone is buried deep in white with but one word revealed only one word can be seen in my memory . . . ___________________ June 17, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/in the snow Copyright Protected, ID 06-1466-300-17 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/20/2022 Second Place

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Date: 6/26/2022 9:33:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your win in the contest! Your purity of words touch the heart, stricken with grief. A very moving piece! :)Paulette
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Date: 6/27/2022 11:17:00 PM
Paulette, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/22/2022 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations, Constane on your win with this beautiful nostalgic poem.
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Date: 6/23/2022 3:45:00 AM
Subimal, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/22/2022 12:54:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually feel snow-gripped emotions here in my "Snow-less" country. God bless you.
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Date: 6/22/2022 7:53:00 PM
Beata, thank you so much for the congrats, and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/21/2022 9:36:00 PM
Excellent. Way to go with the high placement!
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Date: 6/22/2022 7:53:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and placement, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/21/2022 7:37:00 AM
Heartfelt and poignant. Eloquently penned, dear Constance. Congrats on your top win
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Date: 6/21/2022 1:02:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/21/2022 1:53:00 AM
So sad.... ! Thoughts of the dear departed lie in heart like the frozen snow of winter occasionally to be thawed by warm remembrance. Very poignant. Congratulations on your great win.... Constance!
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Date: 6/21/2022 1:03:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/21/2022 12:00:00 AM
Though melancholic, your work is highly poetic. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/21/2022 1:03:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/20/2022 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Indelible memories of the dearly departed, hauntingly beautiful Constance!
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Date: 6/21/2022 1:04:00 PM
Anaya, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment, and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/20/2022 12:29:00 PM
So Exquisitely crafted, Constance. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/21/2022 1:05:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/17/2022 11:28:00 PM
So beautifully sad Constance . Debx
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Date: 6/18/2022 1:01:00 PM
Deb, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, yes sad, sad are my memories, blessings ~Constance

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