In the Face of Death

Entry for the contest: World or War: Viet Nam
Author:  Elaine Cecelia Geroge, of Canada
Inspired by:  the Picture of the soldier’s 
carrying their wounded comrade through
the Viet Nam Jungle.  In this poem, it is
the soldeir on the left.

~~~~~


I dream of heaven here on earth,
where I walk in meadows green,
in the Blue Ridge Mountains, of Virginia
beside a mountain stream;
where rainbow coloured - wild flowers, 
swaye upon a breeze;
and leafy emeralds blossom,
on the limbs of lofty trees.

There in those hills where I was born
 ‘Heather’ waits for me; 
my love, my wife, I see her now
in every breath I breathe.

And I dare not cast my eyes 
 upon this grim reality;
here in Viet Nam,
where thorns and bards on gnarled trees, 
hold me in this hell- hole, 
in an endless muddy stream,
filled with blood, and sweat, and tears,
and victories broken dream.

And I dare not free my hands, 
to wipe away these tears I cry,
I can not! I must not!  for if I do,
 my brother dies!

So with every single beat, 
of this patriotic heart,
staring in the face of death, I march -
I march through Hell, 
And dream of Heaven here on Earth

~~~~~~~
Written:  April 17, 2011
Awarded:  4th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Konos Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Congratultions on your win. Judy
Onclaud Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 6:51 AM
amazing piece on a war that should have happened, lainie..…goody cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
Fraser Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 5:19 AM
Many congratulations Elaine on your win in Miranda's fine contest, Happy Easter....:)
Freeman Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Great to see you in the winner's circle Elaine. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 12:04 AM
a huge congratulations to you Elaine. I knew this one would score high!
A   Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 6:41 PM
honestly.. this poem.. filled emotions... loved and enjoyed...p.d.
Haick Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest, 'Laine. Have a blessed Easter. Love, Annalise
Mehta Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 1:23 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Elaine
Devonshire Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Awesome win for an awesome poem! Congratulations, Lainie. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Lainie. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on yourr win with this outstanding poem of war, I am wiping tears away also, and thanks for your ever lovely comments on my poetry~~
Sweetheart Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 8:12 AM
Congrats Lainie on your wonderful win in Miranda's contest with this illustrious account in poetry of the Vietnam War my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv.. wishing u a blessed and very Happy Easter celebration luv..
M Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 9:43 PM
I have been deeply moved by your words. Fantastic write on the soldiers' feelings
Devonshire Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 2:32 PM
Wow, Lainie, your work is so professional. Everyone else focused on the battle or the unwelcome soldiers returning home, but you took us into the soldier's soul. Surely, he must keep thoughts of love and beauty in his mind or he would go insane in the grim din of combat. Aces to you! Quality speaks for itself -- no luck needed to win this contest. Incredible! Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 9:43 AM
wow, a sublime, moving read, lainie.. you brought my roof down! winning's best to you!! :) huggs, nette
Poet Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 8:17 AM
Very much touching poem!Best wishes Elaine in the contest--kashinath
Goff Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 5:42 PM
I can feel it! Elaine! nice! jimbo
Mehta Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Moving and meloncholic, enjoyed the piece, Elaine
Austin Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 8:49 AM
"Filled with blood, sweet and tears." Don't you want sweat, Elaine. I just had to mention this in case you want to make an absouletely marvelous poem perfect. Love, daver
Greenlee Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 7:08 AM
BRILLIANT!! I was to moved by your work.You don't need luck.I feel you will do very well.....awesome.....
Durbin Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 4:59 AM
A stirring, powerful entry, Elaine. Good luck in the contest!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 11:48 PM
boy, I am astounded by the number of awesome poems inspired by a war picture!! Yours is no exception in the least. Just loved it.
Susan Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 5:57 PM
A very nice write! Dreams can certaintly sustain us when the future looks bleak. A lovely description. Good luck in the contest!
Doreus Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 5:00 PM
this is beautiful... good luck on the contest
Horne Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 6:37 AM
Thanks, Lainie : ) Very moving poem, with great imagery
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