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In My Pretty Garden

In my pretty garden, I see a new blossom. Each morning the flowers, welcome me with their silence. I love to see the swirling butterflies, going in for a kiss from the flowers. Following close behind, I see a big yellow bee. The old rustic fence and gate, holds all this beauty. The beauty does emanate from the flowers, will the silk synthetic flowers take over? Swirling around me, is a heavenly and timeless scent. Is this all an illusion, no because I am in God's real garden.

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Emilia James

Date: 7/29/2024 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Paula. What a beautiful garden you have created with your words. Emilia : )

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2024 9:24:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Garden write & found it to be beautiful. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. It is good to see you... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Valsa George

Date: 7/28/2024 11:02:00 PM

Back to your poem, dear Paula to congratulate you on your well deserved win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2024 9:21:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Garden write again. I enjoyed having you back. Always good to see you... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Len Gasun

Date: 7/28/2024 8:10:00 PM

Such a very beautiful garden. A superb poem on God's garden my dearest poet friend. I love this poem so much. Using the words was quite hard but you did it perfectly well with ease. Big Congrats on your top win! Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful new week! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2024 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my Garden to be A superb poem on God's garden. I enjoyed writing this one with the 8 words. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/27/2024 8:00:00 PM

I just love your garden dear poet. Congratulations.happy writing.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2024 8:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you love my Garden write. I enjoyed bringing this one to life... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/27/2024 11:28:00 AM

Heaven sent indeed--nicely done, Paula, amen and Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2024 8:50:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Garden to be nicely done write. I enjoyed writing this for the 8 words contest. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/27/2024 10:18:00 AM

Oh very nice use of the words! So well thought out and beautiful! I can see the way your mind goes to lovely ideas. God's real garden! "And He walks with me and He talks with me..."xoxo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2024 8:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Garden write. Yes, God's pretty garden. I guess you know the song with the words saying, "He walks with me and He talks with me." I love that song... Have a blessed day writing away......................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/27/2024 8:18:00 AM

"2 Place" In My Pretty Garden ~ Date Written:7/22/2024

Joseph May

Date: 7/27/2024 5:11:00 AM

Lovely write Paula, Congrats on your wiun

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2024 8:18:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my Garden to be a Lovely write. I enjoyed writing this one for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it/for my placement.... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Valsa George

Date: 7/25/2024 9:24:00 PM

Such a lovely poem, dear Paula. The words are fitted in place and so appropriate. I am sure God's garden will be so stunningly beautiful. A great entry for the contest. All the Best, dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2024 8:14:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for All the Best. Glad you found my Garden to be Such a lovely poem. I enjoyed writing this one... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/25/2024 6:16:00 AM

Beautiful writing, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2024 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Garden to be a Beautiful writing. It is good to see you. So glad you enjoyed reading this. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Ink Empress

Date: 7/23/2024 10:59:00 AM

Such a picturesque write dear Paula, this is soul warming and so beautifully done. I especially love “ I love to see the swirling butterflies, going in for a kiss from the flowers.” me too, i love to see butterflies swirling … im sure in Gods garden we will see all that and more, what a stunning write. Best wishes for the contest. Enjoyed reading this, sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 2:06:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my Garden write to be a stunning write. So glad you enjoyed reading this. Thanks for your kind words. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/23/2024 3:20:00 AM

sometimes when we are surrounded by beautiful things we feel like we are dreaming but no, got created lovely things for our sweet imagination and they are all too real. love this Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 2:03:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you Love my Garden write. That makes me happy. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Eve Roper

Date: 7/22/2024 10:59:00 PM

Great use of words for the contest. “The old rustic fence and gate, the swirling butterflies, in God’s garden.” Love it. Good luck in the contest. Blessings my friend

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 2:02:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you Love my Garden write. That makes me happy... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Chantelle Cooke

Date: 7/22/2024 10:45:00 PM

Paula! So enchanting and swaying with beauty in every word! A fav for me! Blessings Chantelle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 1:59:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my Garden write to be So enchanting and swaying with beauty in every word. I see FAV??? Thank You, you made my day a happy one. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/22/2024 2:42:00 PM

Paula, a sweet poem, best of luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 1:57:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best of luck in the contest. Glad you found my Garden write to be a sweet poem. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/22/2024 2:40:00 PM

This truth in flowers makes me happy. Plastic flowers will never bloom as well

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 1:56:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad the flowers in my Garden made you happy. Yes, Plastic flowers will never bloom. Only God's beautiful flowers will bloom in His garden. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2024 2:37:00 PM

Ahh!! I like the tough of faith at the end. It is nice to see all of nature and appreciate the creator for giving us the privilege of being here. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 1:53:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Garden write. God's pretty garden. Have a blessed day writing away......................

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/22/2024 1:46:00 PM

Only God can make a garden so beautiful. What a sweet write. I enjoyed my visit to your beautiful garden today. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 1:50:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed your visit my Garden write. Yes, God's beautiful garden. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/22/2024 10:40:00 AM

Hello Paula, yes it is a beautiful garden a garden it is also god's garden. Hugs. /Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2024 2:38:00 PM

Hello Paula, Hugs. Your welcome Paula. Hugs. Your garden and god's garcen is beautiful. Hugs. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2024 12:00:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Garden write. Yes, also God's garden. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/22/2024 10:27:00 AM

In My Pretty Garden ~ Date Written:7/22/2024