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In Hush of Winter

In hush of winter, wrapped in white, come tread with me in satin snow. The boughs hang low; no wind doth blow. My love, come see the wondrous sight! (Rhyme pattern ABBA) Nov. 17, 2021 for Caren Krutsinger's November Or December Quatrain Poem Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/10/2022 4:43:00 PM
Dear Andrea, Your poem so gentle like the fallen snow. "in hush of winter, wrapped in white" just lovely. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/10/2022 12:35:00 AM
Great invitation to enjoy the beauty of the season. Very picturesque narration. Short and sweet. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/8/2021 6:50:00 AM
oh, this is lovely
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Date: 11/21/2021 9:50:00 AM
Vivid imagination at play - my mom was a nursery school teacher for many years, and I remember reading one of the end of term reports she wrote and it said exactly what i've just said. Your imagery is always amazing! Superb write dear Andrea. Hugs blessing, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/21/2021 4:28:00 AM
very nice indeed...Delice
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Date: 11/19/2021 8:15:00 PM
It is simple and sweet ! Enjoyed reading this !
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Date: 11/18/2021 3:40:00 PM
Oh I love this! I can see the pretty snow. Peaceful :)
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Date: 11/18/2021 3:24:00 PM
absolutely charming Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2021 3:23:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... paints a nice picture of something I have never witnessed - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 11/18/2021 2:20:00 PM
Great job Andrea, my wife and I love to go walking in the early snow
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Date: 11/18/2021 1:43:00 PM
Andrea, A magical piece. Love it! Good Luck in the contest. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/18/2021 12:49:00 PM
Your poem is beautifully written, and the metaphor is fantastic! Andrea,  a great contender for the winter weather, and it is well worded. Best for a win
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Date: 11/18/2021 12:35:00 PM
Hello Andrea, Wow! Love this poem. Hugs.
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Date: 11/18/2021 7:42:00 AM
love this, my friend - a sure winner here
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Date: 11/18/2021 7:39:00 AM
Very nice, Andrea. Love and a winter moment to share.
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Date: 11/18/2021 6:06:00 AM
Very nicely done, Andrea:)
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Date: 11/18/2021 4:33:00 AM
Very beautiful--awesome write, Andrea.
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Date: 11/18/2021 1:51:00 AM
Great use of alliteration and a wonderful picturesque scene. Hugs.
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Date: 11/18/2021 1:20:00 AM
Love the poem, Andrea, but if you could keep all that chilly white stuff on your side of the pond, I’d be delighted. All the best in the contest. Terry
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Date: 11/17/2021 6:38:00 PM
Andrea, I love the imagery in your poem! Beautiful! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 11/17/2021 5:45:00 PM
Hi friend, What a beautiful poem. I love it! Almost makes me nostalgic for winter. A winter weather winner, wonderfully written. I'm smitten! luv, Bryan
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