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Icy Bridges

Icy Bridges We stood upon an icy bridge that day saying vows not knowing the road ahead. Blinded by love we could not see our way upon an icy bridge that day we wed. What we had was a blended family His four kids and my four kids gave us eight. If I knew then what I knew now I’d see That icy bridges lead to a cold fate. Vietnam came with him when he came back He suffered like no human ever should. Agent Orange does not wait to attack Still he fought this war like other men would. Beware bridges over troubled waters For some lead to grief and endless slaughters…

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Date: 6/25/2020 2:18:00 PM
I absolutely love the idea of icy bridges and the fact that there are troubles ahead. Great symbolic metaphor. Julie
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 6/25/2020 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Julia! We should all have that sign "Bridge Freezes Before Road" flashing in our brains! Ha! Blessings, Susan Maree
Date: 6/12/2020 9:51:00 AM
I have had the honor to meet & thank many Vets from that war. So, I thank your husband for serving his country, & believing its leaders. Sad, teach-ing poem (After George Floyd, this is so poignant). shalom, shalom. You have much to teach
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 6/25/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Anil. He did not have a choice. He was drafted. He would have gone anyway though. Myself, I hate wars! But I don't imagine anyone likes them except those who profit from them. Shalom! Susan Maree
Date: 6/3/2020 8:20:00 PM
Susan, Balzac once wrote, "God is the poet; men are but the actors. The great dramas of earth were written in heaven" Fair well my friend.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 6/4/2020 11:20:00 AM
I agree with Balzac. Many times after I have written a poem, I wonder where it came from. I always say God's whispers and my muse merge in two part harmony! Thank you Lunita. Blessings, Susan Maree
Date: 5/21/2020 12:47:00 AM
Wow Susan! This is such a different take on the theme. A sonnet with a creatively blended story. Congratulations on your win :)
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 5/22/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Aditi! How kind of you. Blessings, Susan Maree
Date: 5/20/2020 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Susan for your entry, congrats on a nice placement in my contest!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 5/20/2020 5:36:00 PM
Thank you John. I am glad you liked it. Blessings, Susan Maree
Date: 5/18/2020 7:11:00 PM
Short, well-told story. So real.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 5/19/2020 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Curtis. It was a challenge! You are quite welcome. I enjoyed your poem. Blessings, Susan Maree
Date: 5/18/2020 7:06:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Susan. I am honored. Blessings. Curtis
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