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Ice Cream

When I fell asleep I had a wild~ bizarre dream,
My bathtub was filled up with wonderful ice cream.
All my favorite flavors are in my tub,
I was smelling good and it was a great scrub,
Looking at my phone it had gone by a live stream.

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Date: 7/25/2023 9:03:00 AM
Tub filled with ice cream, creamy fun and most creative. Congratulations on your win, Paula!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2023 11:51:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my limerick write to be creative. I now need a very large spoon. Hahah!!! Have a blessed day writing away...............
Date: 7/23/2023 6:30:00 PM
An ice cream bath~~sweet idea! CONGRATS on your win, Paula. Janice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2023 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my fun write. Yes, sweet idea/dream. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/23/2023 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2023 11:48:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my limerick ice cream write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/23/2023 8:10:00 AM
"4 Place" ~ Ice Cream ~ Date Written:7/16/2023
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Date: 7/23/2023 4:52:00 AM
Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my limerick write to be fun. I enjoyed writing it for your wonderful contest. Thanks for the placement and for having this contest. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/22/2023 7:04:00 PM
Oops! Cute limerick, Paula! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2023 8:06:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my limerick write cute. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/20/2023 12:42:00 PM
ha. a really clever punch line!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2023 1:23:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found my punch line clever. It was fun to writer. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/19/2023 5:50:00 PM
This is a hoot! How's it feel to be the flavor of the day, lol.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2023 1:22:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun/cute "Ice cream" write. Very Cold. Guess I need to turn on the Hot water. Hahaha... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/19/2023 2:48:00 PM
Well that is a treat and a whole tub full. Cute limerick Paula. love phyl
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2023 1:20:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my cute Limerick "Ice cream" write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/17/2023 6:55:00 PM
What a treat....dear Paula ! Swim in it, but do'rt eat the whole. You have to do additional exercise to burn the calories ! :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2023 10:00:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Ice cream" write. I need to find a large spoon. My bike has become my new best friend. Hahaha.... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/17/2023 8:18:00 AM
Paula, a tub full of ice creams, how divine ! (PS, I sent you a soupmail)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2023 9:58:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Ice cream" write. Oh yes, divine. Now if I could only find a large spoon. Hahaha.... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/17/2023 5:00:00 AM
Live stream Ice cream! That a good one Paula, maybe that you;d a Ben and Jerry's flavor!!! GL in the contest!
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Date: 7/16/2023 7:08:00 PM
Well, the awards ceremony may just be streaming live from your tub!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2023 9:56:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Ice cream" write. Oh please, let me close the curtain. Hahaha.... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/16/2023 2:25:00 PM
Cute one. Reads like a good contender to me. I wonder if you exited the tub smelling of butter pecan or raspberry? Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2023 9:55:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Ice cream" write. The smell was heavenly. Chocolate, vanilla, mint, strawberry Oh My!!! Hahaha... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/16/2023 10:22:00 AM
A rub in the tub full of ice cream, sounds like a wonderful dream Paula… Belle :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 12:25:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Ice cream" write. Oh yes, a wonderful dream. Now if it would only come true. Hahaha.... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/16/2023 10:15:00 AM
- A bit of a cooling bath... a wishful dream, Paula :))) - A fun limerick :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your GL. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Ice cream" dream write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/16/2023 9:53:00 AM
I've heard of a cold shower,but an Ice cream bath sounds like fun Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 12:21:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Ice cream" write. I enjoyed writing this fun/cute write. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Date: 7/16/2023 9:42:00 AM
Ice Cream ~ Date Written:7/16/2023
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