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Kitten, Illustration, Vector, Drawing, Animals, Cute

I was dreaming of a hunting quest, feral, wild and untamed in a land strange; then, outside my fluffy fur there was a change, the bright sun was shining into our nest. Yawning wide and on the bed my claws- pressed, I am soft grey and a pet of one; I like to prowl pretend mice that in the house run. Oh, on my mother's lips a kiss I have pressed! Well, I think she is my mother, anyway, and I see her eyes flutter and she does stir; MEOW! Is she going to sleep all day ? So into her right ear I loudly purr, I am forced to stand on her chest and plea; Oh! Do get up and make our tea! Then, she hugs me close to her heart with love, and she calls me her little turtle dove! Now, mother is walking towards the kitchen, I zoom past her sliding on the wood floor; yes, ready to do my part- to pitch in, I know mother what dwells behind that door ! That's right, make the tea and in my bowl pour, yes, in my plate my yummy food place; and when I am all full we can play chase . . . so, sorry mother, didn't mean to break that vase! __________________________ March 12, 2022 Poetry/Personification/I Think She Is My Mother Copyright Protected, ID 03-1439-290-12 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, A Brain Strand Formal sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/12/2022 First Place Poem of the Day - March 14, 2022

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Date: 4/9/2022 2:24:00 AM
Hmm, breaking a vase! Amusing yet charming poem, Constance. Thank you.
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Date: 4/9/2022 9:48:00 AM
Andrew, thanks for the comment , visit, and compliment ~Constance
Date: 4/2/2022 9:05:00 AM
That is so precious, Constance. One can easily tell you love your kitty. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 4/2/2022 9:50:00 AM
Ann, thank you so much on the compliment and congratulations and it won first place too, oh yes I adore my kitty kat ~Constance
Date: 3/23/2022 4:57:00 AM
Constance, such an endearing personification! What a cute picture of your Kitty - adorable indeed! A little late, but please accept my congratulations on your POTD - well-deserved! Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 3/23/2022 8:13:00 AM
Mala, thank you so much for the compliment, congratulations and comment, never too late, love ~Constance
Date: 3/15/2022 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 3/16/2022 10:33:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 7:47:00 PM
"Well, I think she is my mother, anyway" Of course you are, because you take care of sweet kitty. This is purrrr-fect in every way. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/16/2022 10:34:00 AM
Brandy, thanks for your comment and for the compliment and congratulations, I love this poem to, it brings a smile to my heart each time I read it too, hugs ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 7:32:00 PM
Constance, back to Congratulate you for POTD. Blessings ~ Hugs
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Date: 3/16/2022 10:34:00 AM
Debra, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings and hugs ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 6:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your purdy kiddy POTD! So warm and cozy!
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Date: 3/16/2022 10:35:00 AM
Anaya, thanks so much for the congratulations and your comment, lol ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 4:11:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on POTD with your sweet kitty poem!
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Date: 3/16/2022 10:35:00 AM
Tania, thank you so much for the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 3:27:00 PM
How sweet Constance. I have always had a cat, even when we had dogs. I love them. We have a year old wannabe calico named Jewels who thinks she owns the house. We spoil her rotten. Congratulations on your cute poem being honored with POTD and winning first place. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/16/2022 10:38:00 AM
Connie, thank you for the wonderful comment, compliment and congratulations, I love your cat Jewels, that's my kind of kitty, I spoil my cat too, treat her like my child, she basically has me wrapped around her paw, and I would not want it any other way, blessings ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 2:38:00 PM
and I'll bet this naughty kitty still got her pie....
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:39:00 PM
John, thank you so much for the comment, oh yes, Snuggles Kitty is just a bit spoiled and gets whatever she wants as long as it is not dangerous ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful Personification Constance, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:25:00 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD with this fun, loving poem :)
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:26:00 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for the congratulations, and compliment, yes, I love my Snuggles kitty to pieces ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. A great write to start my day out with. I love it. Have a blessed day/week...................
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:28:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, I love it too, and Brian gave it a First place win too ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 8:27:00 AM
A marvelous piece of writing, Constance. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:27:00 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 7:34:00 AM
Haha... Thoroughly enjoyed reading the personification dear Constance... Am sure... the one who purred into your right ear is sweet Snuggles... right?... Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor... Loved the rhymes too... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:29:00 PM
Ani, oh yes you got it right, it is Sweet Snuggles, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, hugs ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 7:17:00 AM
Definitely a yummy, cozy one, Constance! Congrats on POTD! ~ Feliz the Cat & Friends
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:30:00 PM
Gershon, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats ~ Constance and Snuggles Kitty
Date: 3/14/2022 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Fresh, sweet and charming write from your heart, expressing your love of cats and kittens. :)Paulette
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:31:00 PM
Paulette, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, oh yes, I love all cats and kittens, and especially my Snuggles Kitty who thinks I am her mother ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 6:04:00 AM
Love it! Congrats on POTD. LOVE LOVE LOVE This. so adorable. God bless you, Constance. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:32:00 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment and congrats, blessings and love ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 6:03:00 AM
Anice poem on the joy of a human / pet relationship. Congrats on the POTD, Constance. Have a great day! Bill
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:32:00 PM
Bill, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations constance on your POTD honors for your Feline Fable!! Enjoy your day xxoo
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:33:00 PM
Mike, thank you so much for the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 5:15:00 AM
BIG congrats Constance, on POTD. A heartfelt poem exuding pure love. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:34:00 PM
Vijay, thank you so much for the congrats and comment, oh yes I love my cat ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 4:45:00 AM
Love the image of a mother cat and her kitten playing together.... ! When the mother sleeps away to glory, how her little one keeps purring into the mother's ears urging her to wake up to make tea....! Great imagination ! Congratulations on your POTD
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:35:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment and the congratulations, problem is Snuggles thinks I am her mother ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 4:33:00 AM
This is an interesting memory... is this one of your cats and you are the mummy? Such a great choice for POTD! Congratulations my friend.
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:36:00 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the congratulations and comment, yes this is my cat Snuggles Kitty who thinks I am her mother ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 1:25:00 AM
A well written personification Constance, very cute imagery, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:37:00 PM
Tom, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/14/2022 1:16:00 AM
Coming back to read this beautiful peace again and congratulate you. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/14/2022 2:37:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulatins ~Constance
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