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Kitten, Illustration, Vector, Drawing, Animals, Cute

I Think She Is My Mother

 
I was dreaming of a hunting quest, feral, wild and untamed in a land strange; then, outside my fluffy fur there was a change, the bright sun was shining into our nest. Yawning wide and on the bed my claws- pressed, I am soft grey and a pet of one; I like to prowl pretend mice that in the house run. Oh, on my mother's lips a kiss I have pressed! Well, I think she is my mother, anyway, and I see her eyes flutter and she does stir; MEOW! Is she going to sleep all day ? So into her right ear I loudly purr, I am forced to stand on her chest and plea; Oh! Do get up and make our tea! Then, she hugs me close to her heart with love, and she calls me her little turtle dove! Now, mother is walking towards the kitchen, I zoom past her sliding on the wood floor; yes, ready to do my part- to pitch in, I know mother what dwells behind that door ! That's right, make the tea and in my bowl pour, yes, in my plate my yummy food place; and when I am all full we can play chase . . . so, sorry mother, didn't mean to break that vase! __________________________ March 12, 2022 Poetry/Personification/I Think She Is My Mother Copyright Protected, ID 03-1439-290-12 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, A Brain Strand Formal sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/12/2022 First Place Poem of the Day - March 14, 2022
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John Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 2:24 AM
Hmm, breaking a vase! Amusing yet charming poem, Constance. Thank you.
La France Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Andrew, thanks for the comment , visit, and compliment ~Constance
Peck Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 9:05 AM
That is so precious, Constance. One can easily tell you love your kitty. Congratulations on POTD!
La France Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Ann, thank you so much on the compliment and congratulations and it won first place too, oh yes I adore my kitty kat ~Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 4:57 AM
Constance, such an endearing personification! What a cute picture of your Kitty - adorable indeed! A little late, but please accept my congratulations on your POTD - well-deserved! Love and blessings ~ Mala
La France Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Mala, thank you so much for the compliment, congratulations and comment, never too late, love ~Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
La France Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations ~Constance
Nicole Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:47 PM
"Well, I think she is my mother, anyway" Of course you are, because you take care of sweet kitty. This is purrrr-fect in every way. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
La France Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Brandy, thanks for your comment and for the compliment and congratulations, I love this poem to, it brings a smile to my heart each time I read it too, hugs ~Constance
Brown Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:32 PM
Constance, back to Congratulate you for POTD. Blessings ~ Hugs
La France Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Debra, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings and hugs ~Constance
Anaya Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 6:46 PM
Congratulations on your purdy kiddy POTD! So warm and cozy!
La France Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 10:35 AM
Anaya, thanks so much for the congratulations and your comment, lol ~Constance
Kitchin Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 4:11 PM
Constance, congratulations on POTD with your sweet kitty poem!
La France Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 10:35 AM
Tania, thank you so much for the congratulations ~Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 3:27 PM
How sweet Constance. I have always had a cat, even when we had dogs. I love them. We have a year old wannabe calico named Jewels who thinks she owns the house. We spoil her rotten. Congratulations on your cute poem being honored with POTD and winning first place. Blessings xxoo
La France Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Connie, thank you for the wonderful comment, compliment and congratulations, I love your cat Jewels, that's my kind of kitty, I spoil my cat too, treat her like my child, she basically has me wrapped around her paw, and I would not want it any other way, blessings ~Constance
Lawless Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:38 PM
and I'll bet this naughty kitty still got her pie....
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:39 PM
John, thank you so much for the comment, oh yes, Snuggles Kitty is just a bit spoiled and gets whatever she wants as long as it is not dangerous ~Constance
May Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 1:20 PM
Beautiful Personification Constance, Congrats on POTD
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats ~Constance
Sands Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations for POTD with this fun, loving poem :)
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for the congratulations, and compliment, yes, I love my Snuggles kitty to pieces ~Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. A great write to start my day out with. I love it. Have a blessed day/week...................
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, I love it too, and Brian gave it a First place win too ~Constance
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 8:27 AM
A marvelous piece of writing, Constance. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:27 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Jayasankar Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Haha... Thoroughly enjoyed reading the personification dear Constance... Am sure... the one who purred into your right ear is sweet Snuggles... right?... Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor... Loved the rhymes too... Hugs... ~ Ani
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Ani, oh yes you got it right, it is Sweet Snuggles, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, hugs ~Constance
Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:17 AM
Definitely a yummy, cozy one, Constance! Congrats on POTD! ~ Feliz the Cat & Friends
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Gershon, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats ~ Constance and Snuggles Kitty
Calasibetta Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Fresh, sweet and charming write from your heart, expressing your love of cats and kittens. :)Paulette
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Paulette, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, oh yes, I love all cats and kittens, and especially my Snuggles Kitty who thinks I am her mother ~Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Love it! Congrats on POTD. LOVE LOVE LOVE This. so adorable. God bless you, Constance. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment and congrats, blessings and love ~Constance
Gentile Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations constance on your POTD honors for your Feline Fable!! Enjoy your day xxoo
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:33 PM
Mike, thank you so much for the congratulations ~Constance
Pandit Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 5:15 AM
BIG congrats Constance, on POTD. A heartfelt poem exuding pure love. Enjoy your day.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:34 PM
Vijay, thank you so much for the congrats and comment, oh yes I love my cat ~Constance
George Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 4:45 AM
Love the image of a mother cat and her kitten playing together.... ! When the mother sleeps away to glory, how her little one keeps purring into the mother's ears urging her to wake up to make tea....! Great imagination ! Congratulations on your POTD
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment and the congratulations, problem is Snuggles thinks I am her mother ~Constance
One Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 4:33 AM
This is an interesting memory... is this one of your cats and you are the mummy? Such a great choice for POTD! Congratulations my friend.
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:36 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the congratulations and comment, yes this is my cat Snuggles Kitty who thinks I am her mother ~Constance
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 1:25 AM
A well written personification Constance, very cute imagery, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:37 PM
Tom, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations ~Constance
Alex Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 1:16 AM
Coming back to read this beautiful peace again and congratulate you. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:37 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulatins ~Constance
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Constance, I love this poem and the picture. This so sweet. I'm putting this in my file. (FAV)
La France Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 2:38 PM
Debra, thank you so much for the compliment and for the FAV ~Constance
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