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I See Beyond

I see beyond the clothes you wear, The color of your eyes and hair, The things you both love and deplore, Your status, education, or All other worldly things. I swear. . . My love for you cannot compare To any other’s. I’m aware Of what you need that you might soar! I see beyond. You are my child; when in despair, You need to know how much I care. I understood your soul before Your earthly sojourn! Evermore I’ll guide you. Come to me in prayer; I see beyond!
For Paula Swanson's Poetry Contest: I See Beyond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/20/2013 11:49:00 AM
This is an amazing poem from you.It is a pleasure to read your oldies.
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Date: 6/6/2012 8:26:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be simply amazing Andrea. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/2/2012 11:36:00 AM
Soup Mail luv..
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Date: 12/30/2011 2:20:00 PM
Nice mystical feelf to this. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/29/2011 7:33:00 PM
Profound! awesome piece Andrea
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Date: 12/28/2011 7:27:00 AM
Another lovely poem Andrea. I am going to mom's for a few days with my sister so will not be on line. No computer. Expecting freezing rain and snow today so see how the roads are before we leave. ttyl love phyl
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Date: 12/27/2011 8:01:00 PM
Congrat to you my dear..another gem from you. BG
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:53:00 PM
Andrea, what a beautifully touching poem, and so masterfully written, I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your win, Greg.
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Date: 12/27/2011 1:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2011 12:06:00 PM
Another awesome write during this xmas season. I missed so much this last month that I am feeling overwhelmed by the amount I have to catch up with. I always enjoy reading your poetry so much and thanks from the heart for reading all of mine. You are a jem. love phyl
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Date: 12/27/2011 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 12/27/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea x
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:49:00 AM
A mother's love in rondeau form! It's is so true what u wrote...your love can't compare to any others...and this is why YOU CAN SEE BEYOND!! Congrats on this win, Andrea. Been sick for past week...hope to be feeling better soon. Dizzy and impacted sinuses. Yuk! Will be back up and in full gear right after the New Year. Hope Christmas rocked! Gwendolen
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I See Beyond" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2011 2:49:00 AM
My congrats too, Andrea! Your poem really deserved it!....All the best!...Hugs...Gert:)
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Date: 12/26/2011 10:35:00 PM
Just beautiful Andrea. Nicely said. Congratulations
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Date: 12/26/2011 4:37:00 PM
Lovely writing Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/26/2011 4:18:00 PM
Andrea congrats on your win, you took the complete opposite idea to mine, love it..David
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Date: 12/25/2011 1:26:00 PM
I realy like the guidance of life you express in this one,A great read and yes you are right I enjoy Stephen King as well !
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Date: 12/23/2011 1:59:00 PM
Hi Andrea I like the thought of seeing beyond the the looks and status quo. And you played that so well in your poem! I wish you luck in the contest. My dear, thank you for reading my HONEY but I think I have to retract it as one of my friends says it send a "not so nice message." If I have time I will go for the HEADS! HAPPY HOLIDAYS AGAIN! Dalila
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Date: 12/23/2011 9:07:00 AM
What a beautiful and tender piece, my friend
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Date: 12/23/2011 8:23:00 AM
This is just beautiful Andrea, I love the peace you bring across and you express it so brilliantly.. Hope you will have a blessed Christmas ;) love Wilma
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:57:00 PM
a truly wonderful poem - so well written and expressed. A most blessed Christmas to you and yours, Big
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Date: 12/22/2011 2:20:00 PM
Wonderful !A fav!!
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Date: 12/22/2011 1:32:00 PM
He sees beyond and he sees within. He sees the good and he sees the sin. He sent this gift to you today. To help the rest of us to find our way. Once again, you've answered the call. Someone posts a contest and you give us your all. Merry Christmas.
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