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I Let It Slip Away

I let it slip away…. But can I ever do it? One long year has passed since I last saw her, With her smiling face and sparkling eyes. Memories haunt me of the days we were together, When she whispered love’s veiled message, With haunting echoes faintly singing. My world then opened into a dreamscape. Together we sat by the side of a jumping cataract, Watching the sunlight dancing through the smoky vapour With every droplet mirroring a spectrum of shades And dreamt of a time when we would be man n’ wife Never knowing she would vanish out from my sky like a rainbow. She was a candle that glowed luminous, Emitting undeniable light of love and warmth Who shone in my world like the light of a harvest moon, A creeper, I thought, would twine round me as on a tree. Now, as I see the homing bird coming to join its mate, And listen to the notes of a nightingale from the deserted wood, I think of her and slip into an abyss of agony and longing, With waves of commotion swirling in my head, And see my sky suddenly turning stygian black. When the setting sun in its twilight glows When the waning day’s last glorious rays enclose I seek her in the hovering silence and seclusion of life, And wonder if love adrift and lost in the air, Would return once more to alight my shattered heart! Sometimes I think I would be better off Without those memories that impair my senses, When a gloomy haze overshadows my world. I can’t deal with these feelings of gloom anymore. So, I let them slip away forever….! _____________________ April.27.2023 ~ Placed First~ I Let it Slip Away Poetry Contest Sponsor- John Lawless

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Date: 5/27/2023 6:27:00 PM
This is lovely, Valsa. Congratulations on first place!
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Date: 5/25/2023 6:58:00 PM
Wonderful to re read this one, Valsa, congratulations:)
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Date: 5/25/2023 9:29:00 AM
A deep emotional poem. Great winner.
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Date: 5/25/2023 4:57:00 AM
I was captured by the haunting depth of this poem. The joyous...slowly becoming the menacing...memories turning to melancholy. Beautifully don Valsa
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Valsa George
Date: 5/26/2023 1:43:00 AM
Hi John, so delighted to see my poem placed at the top. Thanks a lot, dear friend. Thanks also for organizing the contest.
Date: 4/28/2023 1:35:00 AM
A deep poem with plenty of thought. Your visuals are perfect. A poem I loved.
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Date: 4/27/2023 11:20:00 PM
This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/27/2023 11:49:00 AM
- The saying that says: "don't cry over spilled milk" ... popped into my head ... maybe not the best comment, Valsa :) - A lovely and sensitive poem, best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/27/2023 7:01:00 AM
Lovely take on the theme, Valsa:)
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Date: 4/27/2023 6:01:00 AM
Some memories roil us without relief--best to find a way to let them pass. Best to you, Valsa.
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