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I Failed To Write You a Love Poem

I stared at this blank page for days on end in futile scrabble to discover words that would transform this cold, white emptiness into something filled with love and meaning. But pen, hand, and lexicon in my head could not provide the message from my heart. Bite-Size Poem No 22 Poetry Contest Placed 1st Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Date wrote: 04-October-2021

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Date: 10/30/2021 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful poem and win!
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/1/2021 6:45:00 AM
Thank you, RJ, for visiting and your kind comments.
Date: 10/24/2021 1:07:00 AM
I have a feeling that this block does not last long with you. Congratulations on your win.
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2021 7:10:00 AM
Hi Caren, thank you so much for your kind comments, but sometimes it does last, the block; that is why I enjoy the little contest on PS; it sparks me, best Terry.
Date: 10/20/2021 7:37:00 PM
Dear Terry, poignant beauty spills from your wonderful pen. Your failure to express is so very emotionally expressive. Congratulations for your excellent win in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/21/2021 1:20:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, for such kind comments, warm wishes back to you.
Date: 10/12/2021 6:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win for this lovely poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/13/2021 12:53:00 AM
Thank you Karen.
Date: 10/12/2021 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on a win. Many times one does not know what to write. Love your line "Into something filled with love and meaning." Have a blessed day............
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/13/2021 12:54:00 AM
Thank you Paula.
Date: 10/12/2021 6:45:00 AM
What your poem's title actually reveals is that you wanted to write a poem of your love for someone in the first place. Whether you failed or not, I don't think matters. Indirectly, Terry, you did write a love poem and deserve all the credit you and your poem has subsequently garnered. Cheers - Gary
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/13/2021 12:56:00 AM
Thank you, Gary; it was my intent to say I could not find the words to express my feelings fully.
Date: 10/11/2021 3:20:00 PM
Great write !! fully deserving of the top spot! Congrats!!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/12/2021 12:47:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 10/11/2021 11:30:00 AM
Terry, this definitely gives the heartstrings a good tug! So hard when our words fail us - especially as writers! Congratulations on your win!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/12/2021 12:47:00 AM
Thank you Sam for your kind words.
Date: 10/11/2021 10:05:00 AM
That's so beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/12/2021 12:48:00 AM
Thank you Ann so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/11/2021 9:31:00 AM
Terry, congratulations on your win in Line's contest with these beautiful six lines ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/12/2021 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Constance.
Date: 10/11/2021 4:08:00 AM
Wonderful. Congrats on the top win. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/11/2021 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, Gina. I enjoyed composing the poem, so I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/4/2021 3:12:00 PM
Such strength & complexity in these lines. I very much enjoyed this!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/6/2021 12:48:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Date: 10/4/2021 12:39:00 PM
You just did...write such a poem, Terry, and it surely comes from your heart. I liked it.
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/6/2021 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Milton I appreciate your comments.
Date: 10/4/2021 10:10:00 AM
I often fail at the ones closest to my heart. <3
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/6/2021 12:49:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and reading.

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