I Beat Up the Sun

But the fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, gentleness and self-control. The law is not against such things. Galatians 5:22-23

I BEAT UP THE SUN

The sun is finally coming up. I beat it up
with my hands, hammering the tablet
and my eyes darting back and forth

as if I were an old-fashioned carriage
on a typewriter. Reading my friends
before cockcrow. Gears, spinning, 

pushed and pulled me out of bed.
Galatians scripture meditation 
off a tooth. Reading to get it right.

Proverbial pen bleeding ink as I think
about the long, long day ahead, filled
with pounding, staining, sustaining,

amusement of midnight colors, lights
in the church windows, all else stark
begging for a good night’s sleep. Deep,

I shall dream in the morning, as I set
sail, way past the sun. But alas,
it will not be so, for coffee clashes

with that ship called friendship, so
I will pour myself out of bed, clean up
a bit, stir in cream, motivate myself 

into believing I can do it all. Light
in the church window will create a smile,
because I put it there; true of snow

and the stars, too. I can do anything
as long as I get a grip on the day. Fruit
of the Spirit, all nine - a healthy feast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 5:23 PM
Your word style is just amazing, especially because it's so simplistic. Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 6:06 PM
I really appreciate that! Hugs ~ Kim
Leiser Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 8:03 PM
This poem is so cleverly written, Kim. Almost stream of consciousness, but intentional. Love your phrasing, and I love your references to Scripture, as well. A real treat to read and a Fave!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much, Laura! :)
Empress Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:04 AM
“ as if I were an old-fashioned carriage on a typewriter” what a brilliant and authentic line that is so creatively crafted. “ Proverbial pen bleeding ink as I think about the long, long day ahead“ i can resonate with that. So descriptive and so well flowing, with such exquisitely woven thoughts, and the quote on the top, i agree too, loved reading this .
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Thank you! I appreciate you so, Ink Empress! :)
Situation Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Fruit of the spirit? is that in Galations. Well writen.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:19 AM
Yes, it is! If we lived within the Holy Spirit’s harmony, we would live happily ever after!
Rolland Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 2:38 PM
exciting poem, uplifting, you move forward, and the reader follow, enjoyed Kim, what a wonderful title yann
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:19 AM
Thank you, Yann! I appreciate you so much!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Wonderful excerpt from St Paul. Wonderfully developed with a great finale. Hugs and blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs and blessings, dearest friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:41 AM
A wonderful write. Great ending... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Oh, thank you so much and to you too! Happy everyday writing, dear one!
May Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:25 AM
Meditating on a scriptural verse that bears fruit to all things good, Very nicely done
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Joe, thank you for your very nice sentiment! <3
Faure Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 6:49 AM
Oh my what energy loved reading your work.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Thank you, dear Joyce <3
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Very lovely and full of zeal poem! Have a nice day ~AA
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Thank you, Abdullah! I appreciate you!
Lane Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 6:41 AM
With a meal of fruitage of the spirit, we should be nourished every day. I liked your occasional rhyming where not expected, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Thank you for noticing the rhyming! I often let my poem find its own pace! Let’s live by God’s fruit! We cannot go wrong!
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 6:22 AM
- ... first of all ... enjoy your coffee, Kim :) - Great written :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:24 AM
You are so sweet! Wish we could have a cup together :) Blessings and Cheer, Sweetie!
George Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 6:18 AM
If one believes that one can do everything with God's assistance, the word 'impossible' will be removed from our mind and thoughts. So don't think of 'the long long day ahead'. Great penning dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 11:26 AM
I have learned that too. Take your daily steps, staying with God’s restful pace…restful, not always sitting nor sleeping but doing His work His way. God bless you so much! <3
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