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I Am Leaf

A world without a spine looks through nonchalant eyes, this chill i breathe of you buoyant on frigid air, I am leaf within wind while woodland stage awaits, storm clouds keep on rolling leads me to the unknown. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 3/28/2020 5:12:00 PM
Congrats, harry. I am going through the winner list and am loving these poems. I love how you personified the leaf before its journy to the unknown.
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Date: 3/27/2020 10:07:00 AM
Harry, congratulations on your win in my contest with this personification of a leaf, I am a leaf, what a wonderful thing that would be but just for a little while _Constance
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Date: 3/25/2020 10:56:00 PM
Back with abig congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/25/2020 3:01:00 PM
Harry Horsman, vivid imagery flows throughout your poem like the leaf you describe in terms of personification. ~ Sonia
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Date: 3/21/2020 12:44:00 PM
I do enjoy a personification poem and this one is certainly a gem - I am a leaf within wind, while woodland stage awaits. Simply breathtaking Harry. Blessings my friend, Jennifer
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Date: 3/21/2020 9:14:00 AM
......how pretty ‘ while woodland stage awaits’ beautiful nature poem. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/18/2020 10:43:00 PM
Beautiful imagery of nature, harry!
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Date: 3/17/2020 11:44:00 PM
Wonderful personification.. Great entry in the contest.. Good luck..
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:14:00 PM
Great way to write this personification great description. Good luck in the Alexandrine contest a winner already.
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Date: 3/17/2020 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful, any way one looks at it, Harry. I am caught between personification and metaphor rendition. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/17/2020 2:34:00 PM
great imagery in this one.... I hope the leaf can withstand the winds... wonderful write, best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:04:00 AM
I like the way your poetic mind works Harry.
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Date: 3/17/2020 5:06:00 AM
Iam leaf within wind, Nicely panned sir Harry
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Date: 3/16/2020 9:39:00 AM
Wonderful, original perspective. Thanks for your Nature poems, perusals ... Sir Harry. Shalom Shalom
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Date: 3/15/2020 11:59:00 PM
G'day Harry ... thanks Harry. The unknown indeed - Lindsay
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Date: 3/15/2020 3:53:00 PM
VERY well done , Harry. I am glad to see you inspired by Dear Heart's contest.
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Date: 3/15/2020 7:14:00 AM
So well articulated, Harry! All the best.
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